Rekindle memories where you’ve not been
on your way to nowhere else
with nothing each side and nothing between
travelling forward in reverse
there’s so much to see and there’s so little seen.
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Michael Edwards (
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Such true words Michael.
Love the artwork.
Andy
Thanks Andy
Good write and pic M.
Seen Burlington-Bertie again?!
saw him in Bow.
I'd like to say... but i won't... because there isn't a, well there could be but i haven't seen one, maybe it's still where it wasn't yesterday when i looked. I'm certainly not sure.
Your piece today reminds me of goldfinche's venture into the kitchen this morning.
Along similiar lines - yes - there's none so blind as those who won't see.
'all that new, from that knew
we like to pretend
doesn't already exist, in our
memories..'
a thought provoking read
thanks for sharing Michael..
(btw
was that artwork done on a textured surface?)
My pleasure LB - the sketch is on rough watercolour paper.
Wow I admire your craftiness with words. The line "travelling forward in reverse" is so clever. There is so much to see and love and do yet it feels like time can be against us. Wonderful and thought-provoking.
Thanks Rocky - yes: see my response to Teddy. I almost feel sorry for those who won't see - they miss so much.
Love the intriguing title amid superior rhyming Mike - a wise conclusion too in that final line.
Perfect in every respect ..
and has the accompanying artwork already been purchased ..
am asking for a friend .. Neville
Thanks Neville - I did a set of four of these and two have been sold but can't recall which two. I'll pop out to the studio in the morning and check and get back to you - bit too late now - I'm in my pyjamas.
me too .. or would be if I had some .. cheers
Just crept out to the studio still in dressing gownn - this one has gone - I have two more which I'll include with postings today and tomorrow. The one above is probably the best but I can always do more to chose from if anyone is interested.
You're a wise man Mike. Great poem.
Not sure about wise but I'll accept the accolade anyway 😁😁😁 Thanks SC
You are right Michael. Really wise words. Beautiful art piece.
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