As The Winds Were Blowing

Saxon Crow

I dreamed a dream

Of my love last night

She came to me 

All dressed in white

She touched my cheek

And began to cry

As the winds were blowing

 

And in this dream

She did sing to me 

Of the love she had

As real can be

And then she smiled

Tears in her eyes

As the winds were blowing 

 

And when I woke

To my surprise

My love was not

Resting by my side

And what was left 

Were my lovers tears

As the winds were blowing

 

I searched so far

So far and wide

Across the hills

Over mountain side

But she had gone

And all I heard 

Were the winds still blowing 

 

But when I sleep

I see her walking

Between the moon

And morning light

And when I'm quiet

I can hear her calling

As the winds are blowing 

And when I'm quiet

I can hear her calling

As the winds are blowing 

  • Author: Saxon Crow (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2022 00:13
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  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful lovelorn words SC.

    Andy

  • Caring dove

    Lovely words crow . Beautiful writing .. love the flow and feel to your words 🙂

    • Saxon Crow

      Thanks VB

      • Caring dove

        I like how she is in nature .. a nice thought )) although sad that she isn’t there in person anymore

      • orchidee

        Bit windy there then!? Not baked beans! lol.
        Good write SC.

        • Saxon Crow

          How very dare you spoil a romantic piece of work. That being said it took all my will power to not out the word fart in this poem

          • orchidee

            Oh no, I've lowered the tone of the poem now! lol.

          • Nicholas Browning

            This is an expressive piece filled to the brim with forlorn adoration. A much enjoyed read Mr. Crow.

            • Saxon Crow

              Thank you Mr Browning.

              • Nicholas Browning

                That's what my teachers in school used to call me xD I feel like I'm in trouble now

                • Saxon Crow

                  Go to the corner and think about your attitude Mr Browning.... How's that?

                  • Nicholas Browning

                    It was more like, "Mr. Browning, go to the Principal's office!"

                    • Saxon Crow

                      Good man! I'm proud of you.

                      • Nicholas Browning

                        It's official. I've won the game of life.

                      • dusk arising

                        Wonderful tale of loves mystery in the night. As good a tale as ever i saw told.
                        Has a wonderous haunting feel to dwell upon as your readers poetic mind romances, windblown.

                        • Saxon Crow

                          Thanks Dusk. Glad you liked it.

                        • orchidee

                          Did I have to lower the tone of this poem to baked beans level? It could have been sprouts! lol.

                        • Christina8

                          A wonderful poem of love lost and has a great cadence to it. Great job!

                        • Rozina

                          A beautiful dream of your love.

                          • Saxon Crow

                            Thanks Rozina but she's nothing to do with me haha

                          • Rocky Lagou

                            So encapsulating. I mean totally enchanting. I admire your words and this bittersweet effect your poem has. That lost lover, still alive in the mind.



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