dusk arising

part of all this

 

 


it was as if the land talked
entering my mind through
some instinctive hereditary vibration
comforting and rassuring
like those childhood times
in grandpa's house
safe, completely relaxed
here out on the land
trees welcoming
I am proud to be among them
something long lost
has come home
i am actually part of all this

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 31st, 2022 00:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: If only everyone would share this sort of empathy maybe we would be looking after our home instead of abusing it.
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Saxon Crow, Rocky Lagou, MendedFences27.

Comments8

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Lovely writing dusk )) love nature and it’s so important to look after .

    • dusk arising

      Yep, we are all a part of it.

    • tallisman

      Good message and it’s true that some places, well loved call out for you…

      • dusk arising

        More a frame of mind for me these days (i'm getting quite old). Being out there, anywhere away from people, does something to me.

      • Saxon Crow

        How coincidental. I was aiming for the same feeling in my poem today. Great stuff dusk

        • dusk arising

          Thank you Saxon. It must be something in the air.

        • Goldfinch60

          Such true words d a, if only we could all walk in peace with Nature.

          Andy

          • dusk arising

            Most of us probably do after a good few years on the planet, it's what we do beforehand which leaves a lot to be desired i think.

          • Rocky Lagou

            Wow, that final line hit like a truck. Yes, we are all part of this marevlous world. I just hope we can all cherish it and spread kindness instead of hate.

            • dusk arising

              Wouldn't it be a wonderful world if we could. If we rid the world of it's religious organisations and their idealism we might be taking a step into the right direction. They talk of love and devotion but only if played by their rules.

            • Neville



              fine words indeed .. and how bloomin true .........................................Neville

              • dusk arising

                Yep, i think i might actually be taking roots too.

              • Michael Edwards

                Nice one dusk

                • dusk arising

                  Thank you M.E. In the 70's words of the KIng Crimson track.... 'I talk to the wind, my words are all carried away'.

                • MendedFences27

                  "as if the land talked," "I am proud to be among them." human connection to the land and Nature. WE are all a part of it. It is time to take care of her, this planet. Liked your sense of connection taking you back in time. - Phil A.

                  • dusk arising

                    We surely are all a part of the whole though over the years our technical 'progress' has separated us from the basics of our existence.



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