Never seeing clearly never really straight, trying to focus on something but your focus is always hate.
Anger clouds your vision anger clouds your heart, as you sit there alone in the blackness of dark.
You wonder and reflect where did all this anger start, years of disappointment years of pain has turned my heart to black. I have tried so many times but there is no turning back.
Tears have dropped like rain clouds, your trust for people is unknown. when all this time what you have been searching for is someplace to call home
The torture of love you would gladly give back, to many times it has made you bleed. compassion has been lost somewhere down the line and anger is growing like a weed.
Confusion and circles your head spins like a top, the simple things you have asked for or expected other's to stop. no longer wanting to listen to anything they have to say, a pattern has always been there and now your to tired to even play...
No one should blame you for how you feel, you have done more than your share. The one's that need to prove themselves, if you constantly have to tell them well then to me... they really do not care.
It is like playing a movie again and again, you begin to learn the lines. It is amazing how some people do it and still they expect you to believe their lies.
Mad as hell you lost it, the sparkle in your eyes through life other's have stolen it from you, now your left with nothing... Alone you sit and cry.
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Author:
Tammy Smith Sarazin (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about how people and life can bring disappointments.
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There’s a certain rhythm in the flow of this, I enjoyed reading it…
thank you reading and I am glad you enjoyed.
Without sounding completely egotistical may I refer you to my poem today as it's relevant to your excellent and very relatable poem.
yes of course and thank you for the read.
I was really drawn in to is piece.
Nobodies circumstance will be the same. Nobodies wisdom will provide an answer and to seek love's cushion elsewhere would be untimely.
Your own wisdom will provide the only meaningful words. That wisdom is forming in you right now and will become your guiding light if you are brave enough to follow it.
thank you so much for taking the time to read and your kind words.
This is very true.
I've tried to lower my expectations to avoid disappointment.
right, thank you for reading
Poems that depict actual life and actual human tendencies are welcomed the most by my estimation, because it takes a cultured life to write them.. this poem gets 100 stars by me. Although the pitfalls are accurate, overtime a strong soul will triumph over the hate that disrespectful, self delusional, psychopathic, egotistical, unworthy narcissists, toxic individuals around us can cause.. even the strong fall down to dark powers sometimes, but it is said we are strong because we get back up…, we all did and said something in response to the evil around us we shouldn’t have said or done, at time we may feel totally possessed.. but get back up. Take care sister.
YES!!!! I could not have said it better myself... I like your flow. thank you so much for taking your time to read and comment.
This can really happen in life Raven unless you find the right people to be with, I have been fortunate in my life to have those right people around me.
Good words.
Andy
Thank you for reading and commenting, and yes I have had to let a lot of people go in my life.
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