Guess who winter, it's Spring my dear!
My friend I am early this year.
There's something I must let you know,
You're finished here it's time you go.
Take with you those gray skies and snow!
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Winter all that I have to say,
'begone's' the order of the day.
Just go and visit your friend Fall.
The two of you could have a ball.
Leave here right now once and for all.
```
Your time is up your through my friend.
I'm Spring and I am back again.
I'm here now and for what it's worth.
My Spring showers shall dampen earth.
And once again I'll bring rebirth.
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For two of us there is no room,
it's time the trees and flowers bloom.
I'll bring the sunshine and blue skies,
the buzzing bees and butterflies.
So many treats to please the eyes.
```
Guess who; you're in for a surprise,
today Winter it's your demise~
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Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of Spring and Winter humor...
- Category: Nature
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Comments9
A wonderful presentation of the seasons and their staying past their welcome or early arrival. Nicely worded my friend
Thank you Soren! 👋
Great hearing from ya!
Spring 🌱 is my favorite
time of year! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
A lovely piece of humour here. I am all for doing away with winter Thad. I am a spring gal and I just love the season of rebirth. Can’t wait for those daffodils to dance in spring sunshine. You have given your readers a Sunday treat with this posting:)
Hii Cassie!! 🌻🌿🪴
I guess you guessed
Spring is my favOrite
time of year!😊
Have a wonderful
evening poetess!!
🐦 🌹🤗 Thad
lol please do send the winter my way, I am swelling like a hot air balloon here. 🤣
Hii Teddy!! 🧸 👋
Thanks for stopping
By my way!!! 😉
I'm sending winter
to you today!! ☺️
Nice hearing from
you poetess!! 🌻🌹Thad
Love it
Hi ya Tony!! 👋 🍵
Thank you bro,
glad ya loved it!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, best regards to you as well
Lovely and evocative with a charming rhythm waltzing along through the lines until it finishes seemingly with a flourish, albeit in these parts 6 months too early for its triumph.
Hii poetess!! 👋 🌱🌻
Thanks for stopping
by my way!! 😄
Glad you enjoyed
y'all have a NICE day!!
Best wishes 🌹 🌞. Thad
This is just a wee bit weird, Thad, if you don’t mind me mentioning.
I always thought you lived in the northern hemisphere….. Now your poem accurately describes just what is happening right now to me. Yes, Spring has suddenly sprung very early……….. Summer soon, and I will need to consume fluid full time just to keep hydrated – bring on the rain again…. Are they just going to get hotter?
Your rhyme scheme beautifully consistent throughout – hasn’t it got a name?
Howdy Dave my friend!! 👋 🍵
Thanks for your awesome
commento bro!! ✌️🌱🌿
No, this rhyme scheme
hasn\'t got a name.. 😞
Just something I like to use.
You have a wonderful day!! 👍
Best regards Thad
PS- YES, it's gonna get hotter! 🌞🙃
"Spring, I was enjoying a nice, long sleep. Now you`ve gone and ruined it!"
Great write, Thad.
Hii ya my friend! 👋🌱
Thank you sorry
about your 😴💤 🤣🤣
Bout time you woke! 😀
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Well, a little bit late but heartfelt and well phrased. Good work.
Howdy Dan!! 👋 🍵
Thank you for
your cool comment! 😎
I appreciate it
immensely!!👍🌞
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Good words Thad, winter can have its delights but Spring can dissolve winter very quickly.
Andy
Howdy Andy guy! 👋
Always appreciate
your visits,
y'all have a great Monday!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
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