I can't believe I'm sitting
writing yet another poetry installment
about my utter feelings of loss
I'm completely in the dark
the dark within myself
I don't know how to crack open my shell
I don't know if I will ever really find myself?
this time it's different
It's not about the grief I hold for others
this grief is for me
and I don't know...
If I will ever see the light?
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: September 11th, 2024 14:18
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 35
- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Cassie58, Accidental Poet, Pappy155
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Comments7
Stop digging down. If you won't brew and sip a heartening cuppa tea, then pull an espresso or brew a cup from your moka pot. It's easier than you realize. You will find yourself when you stop looking. Look up. Listen. It's all around you.
I love this beautiful tribute to dredging the depths of one's soul in search for what is either not there or else remains invisible until the candle splashes light on it. I love the aching poignancy and details. Thank you very much for sharing.
Thank you so much Cheeky Missy for this gorgeous review. You read it beautifully ❤️ 🌹
You're too nice. My pleasure!
Lost in yourself dear Teddy. In the depths of soul searching. When you get that far down, the only way is up. Keep searching for the light. Beautiful poetry dear poet. 🌹
Awe thank you my dear Cassie, I hope your eyes are fabulous now. Biggest of hugs to you my dear friend. 🌹
My left eye is good. Thank you Teddy. Now I have to get my right eye done ! After my holiday, I think.
Awesome write
Thank you so much dear Tony36 🌹
You're welcome Teddy
To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to step on it or trip over it you may but otherwise you need light,. I hope you crack that shell and find the light.
Thank you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
The light you seek is within your own heart Teddy. Healing is never easy and fast. We heal in the knowing that those that have gone will always be remembered in our hearts. It's their light we see that heals us. 🌹
Thank you for these beautiful words dearest A.P 🌹
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I am sure that light is there in your life Teddy, I will give you a match to light that candle:
Andy
Thank you dear Andy, now the BBQ ban is finished I would appreciate that. 🌹
Riding the roller coaster isn't fun! In time the highs will be lower and the lows will be higher - "normal" will come again!
This is one of my more dramatic ones 🤣, they aren't all like this thank you so much dear Pappy155 🌹
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