Song:
Ma beer tastes bitter gal since ya been gone.
Tears keep a fallin' in each frosted glass.
Ah been tryin' but ah jest can't move on,
man she was cuter en a large mouth bass!
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Ah picked up a hooker down at the fair.
She reminded me a lot about you.
She had 'big boobies' an yer color hair.
But she stole ma wallet an ma weed too?
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Chorus:
Even ma hound dawg is howlin' the blues.
Me an Fang it seems we ain't gut no luck.
He was all shook up when ah broke the news.
Her an her new BO, swiped our pickup truck.
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Song:
Thet 'engagement ring, neva gut it back?
A thousand bucks I dun owe on it still.
Am sure thet ah will have a heart attack!
It's gunna take years ta pay off that bill.
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It's 'nother Tuesday these weeks seem so long.
Am wishin' ah neva met her at all.
Thet dang Jukebox keeps a playin' our song.
As tears in ma beer continya ta fall~
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Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 13th, 2024 08:57
- Comment from author about the poem: A sad song, in Shakespearean Sonnet form..... A real heartbreaker...
- Category: Sad
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Comments5
Your heartbreaker made me smile:) Sorry Thad, I know I should be much more sympathetic, but you have such a way with words. Don’t cry in your beer, you’ll only dilute it:) Stealing your wallet and your weed is unforgivable. Have yourself a much better day. 😀
Hii ya Cassie!! 🤠 🌻
Thank ya kindly👍
I got over her so I
won't be crying
in my beer no more! 😭 🍺
Best wishes 🤗 🐦 🌹 Thad
I gots edits fer ye.
Hi ya poetess!! 😊🤠
Thanks 👍 But every
word in this song 🎵 🎶 🎵 🎶
needs an edit! 🤣🤣🍺
Have a grrrrr8. Weekend!! 😁
Best wishes 🤗 🌹 Thad
I declare, you're too fun!
Excellent song Thad
Hi ya Tony! 👋 🍺
Thank you my friend
glad you enjoyed!😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
You're welcome, best regards to you as well Thad
G’day Thad,
I cannot with all certainty discern if this is you, or you have posted this on behalf of a close friend.
Either way it is abundantly clear that the current difficulty is the result of unresolved trauma in early childhood, that the inability to sustain meaningful long term relationships requires long term consistent therapy and counseling. Please pay my lovely receptionist-manager (she manages very well in the sack) on your way out…
Great rhyme colour and flow, Thad.
Howdy Dave!! 🐶👋
Thank you for your
advice and commento! 👍
Grrrr8 a hearing from
Ya bro!! 😀
Best regards ✌️ Thad!
Keep enjoying your beer Thad.
Andy
Howdy Andy guy!! 👋🤠
I will!! 🍺 Cheers!
Thanks for stoppin' by! 👍
Have a grrrrr8 weekend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
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