When the night turns light
and the day becomes bright
and the buttonholes in my PJ's
are filled with ideas
my coffee makes its self
toast jollying a jig
and the jam waiting patiently
upon the knife’s edge
the butter takes a slip
as the autumn sun, shines in...
ah, what a glorious way
to start my day.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Happy Saturday to all my gorgeous friends. 🌹
- Category: Reflection
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Comments13
Lovely lighthearted writing teddy .. love this )🌸
Thank you so much 🌹❤️
positive way to start the day, love the PJ's lines!
So very happy to hear this, thank you so much 🌹
And a happy Saturday to you too = - great poem to start the day.
It's been a fab day, I'm sorry I'm not around much but I currently have an English project with a big bunch of beautiful Italian children who are so enthusiastic about learning, it's taking much of my time and I love it. Thank you dearest Michael 🌹
Loved the idea-filled buttonholes, to be up and away from inactivity and slumber, very sprightly!
That line came when I was sleeping, amazing I got up to jot it down and waited patiently for the rest. Thank you so much. 🌹
Such bright words of joy fill this poem With smiles And sunshine. A joy to read, it brought smiles to my face.
My dear sorrenbarret, sorry I've been quiet I will certainly catch up, I've had the great priveliage to creat an English group for 11 year olds and it's amazing. 🌹
You know how to brighten a cold, wet, winter day don’t you? 🙂.Dear Teddy this is a delightful gift to your readers. Love that first stanza. Lovely and creative. Can’t help but smile 🌹
I'm more than thrilled to know brightened your morning dearest Cassie, I've been snowed under too lol will catch up with you all. Biggest of hugs my dear friend. 🌹
Sounds like a glorious day indeed, especially when coffee makes itself and toast is jollying a jig! Miy kind of morning! Well done friend, this brightened my morning! So, good morning to you and I hope you have a brilliant day! 🌹👏
Dear Tristan, thank you so much, I'm always amazed when my scribbles are so enjoyed. Thank you so much. 🌹 🤗
You are welcome! 🤗
A fine poem for a cold rainy day.
Ah, you haven't had snow yet then dear Jerry! Happy Saturday and happy thanks giving week. 🌹
No, we are having a strange Fall. Hardly any frost. Very odd for the time of year.
Excellent write Teddy
Thank you dear Tony. 🌹
You're welcome
Beautiful imagery and use of the senses. Wonderful work, sweet Teddy.
dearest Thomas thank you so much. ❤️
Wonderful way to start the day Teddy and I hope that all of your days start in this wonderful way.
Andy
Thank you my dearest Andy. You too my dear friend. 🌹
truly gorgeous. i hope not just the Saturday, but the whole week is beautiful
Thank you so much, I wish the same to you too. 🌹
Thanks for the smile...I truly enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to reading more of your words.
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