It's you
-
Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: December 8th, 2024 04:14
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 215
- Users favorite of this poem: Salvia.S, Demar Desu, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange, domilla, Teddy.15, Qurrathul Ain
Offline)
Comments23
Haha! Reminded me of the Fun Lovin Criminals song "Come Find Yourself."
Tongue in cheek but serious as well. Each of us contain the elements for a perfect poem
Thanks 😂😂
Although to some it is tongue in cheek, it is truly meant that all of us contain the elements of a perfect poem. Thank you so much for the read and comment.
Thank you!
Most welcome and it is meant for this read and for the meaning of the poem
It's youth !
A most interesting addition and it would be true as well, Thanks for the read and comment
Ah!
The perfect response Cryptic as only a poet could do
We all are Living poetry with feelings and expressions.
Indeed so true. Thank you David
Good write SB. Did it take you hours to write this one? lol.
A thousand drafts and rewrites indecision is the devil. Thanks Orchi
Thanks
Most welcome
Well said, Soren.
Thank you Jerry
What a very beautiful thought Soren. Can you see me smile? You have brightened the day for many. Thank you.
'Tis true for all. We are all perfect poems with our strory to tell if only others would listen.
Human existence is god’s poetry in motion as only he, she or it can.
So true. Thank you so much
Me? Imperfect.
Don't sell yourself short my friend. Thanks so much for the read
Realistic, Soren
Ahhh. Superb.
Thank you so much Thomas it is truely appreciated.
Hahaha, good one. Love it!
Thank you I mean it, both the thank you and the poem. We all have the potential for a perfect poem in us.
😮 🤯🙏🌹👏 You sir are an artist and this is the very essence of art! Bravo bravo bravo!!!! And...of course...thank you! ❤️ You are too.
Tristan you are too kind and I thank you for your support
You are welcome friend.
Made me smile!
In believing it the smile will grow. Thank you so much for the read and comment. We all contain the elements and it is up to us to use them.
Thank you, 🙏
I totally agree
everyone is a perfect
poem, we all have
that possibility!! 👍🌞
Great share my friend!!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thanks so much Thad
sometimes less means so much .. 😎👍
The shortest poem I plan to publish, one site wouldn't let me publish it requiring at least 20 characters so I had to add 13 exclamation points. Thanks for the read
Thank you soren, 🤣🤣🤣
Andy
Thank you and most welcome Andy
Oh how did I miss this!!!! Kudos a thousand times... 🌹 I knew it! 🤣
Thank you for the read and for being you
Always (I'm taking that as a compliment) 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Absolutely
Wow, that was really powerful, Soren. Really was. Reminded me of the avant-garde art in the 60s. Yoko Ono asking customers to climb a ladder to look through a magnifying glass on the ceiling. There in little letters was simply the word Yes.
Thanks so much Tom it is most appreciated. I truely believe that if we listen we can hear each person's poem as they speak and act and each is unique.
TWO WORDS THAT ENCOMPASS A WORLD OF MEANING- THIS IS INDED BREVITY AT IT'S BEST.
NEXT POEM ON YOURSELF [TITLED ME , MYSELF AND PERHAPS A BIT LONGER ?]
WAITING EAGERLY
Thank you Nafisa it is appreciated
always welcome
Awww❤
Just look in a mirror its true
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.