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arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
A reminder to extend an olive branch… where possible.
Let us sup of the dignity of kindness and humility…

 

Galaxies argue, expansion quickens,

Hubble’s tension persists

                       ...distances debated.

Black holes dance sideways

gravity’s pull defied; space bends

reality warps;

                ...cosmic ballet in motion.

 

A pair of stars entwined in light:

faces tense , cosmic forces at play.

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 24th, 2024 02:30
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • TobaniNataiella

    Cosmic Ballet in Motion, lovely line, i wonder how they would describe us looking down, enjoyed the read.

    • arqios

      I wonder as well! Sometimes Brownian movement chores to mind. Thanks kindly 🙏🏻

      • TobaniNataiella

        You are very welcome

        • arqios

          🙏🏻 thank you

        • Neville



          ......................................... sprinkles of stardust abound ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟✨✨⭐🌟🌟💫👍

          • arqios

            Ah yes! Quite so after dovetailing and cresting.

          • Michael Edwards

            And I remain here in my own little world content and happy - all the best .

            • arqios

              All the best! And thanks. Not so alone digitally speaking 🙏🏻🎄🎁

            • sorenbarrett

              Cryptic such a beautiful image but then natue is poetry it is up to the author to put it to words and you did well. Merry Christmas

              • arqios

                Yes, hard to keep up with nature; need utmost respect 🫡 thanks kindly 🙏🏻

              • orchidee

                Great title! lol. Maybe call it 'Space Dance' as life is sometimes called a 'dance' or rhythm, and I go on about life's 'pages of history', for example?

                • arqios

                  Thanks o 🙏🏻 good suggestions 👍🏻

                  • orchidee

                    Or Cosmic Dance?

                    • arqios

                      Now all we need is music to dance to, that human ears can hear!

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      I absolutely felt like a child in a planetarium, or looking up at a starry sky with no lights to impede the view. What a wondeful poem that works both literally and metaphorically. Bravo! 🌹👏

                    • Thad Wilk

                      Wow! 😳
                      Terrific poem
                      great brevity!! ⭐🌟⭐
                      Artfully expressed,
                      eye pleasing imagery!💫
                      My pleasure to read indeed!
                      Best regards ✌️ Thad
                      Merry Christmas!! ⛄🎄 ,🧑‍🎄

                      • arqios

                        Merry Christmas Thad 🎄thanks 🙏🏻

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Lets all dance at this time of year arquios.

                        Andy



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