When it All Seemed to Fit
There was a time once
it all seemed to fit ..
When our bodies were
perfectly dovetailed
and our lights were all lit ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: wishing seasonal best wishes to one and all 💜
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Lit and dovetailing! Now there’s a sight to behold, well… better to be entangled in than be a peeper tommer…
Absolutely my thoughts on the matter too sir .. Have a brill break & enjoy to the hilt .. Neville
Will do and so would you! “What a good boy am I!” Are we…
And may there be a time again, good read
............... Cheers n all that jazz .. Have a blast this Xmas my friend .. 😎👍
You too
We cn but hope it will all fit again Neville.
Andy
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I know it well - the older you get the bigger get the ear lobes and belly whilst, as someone once put it, your d**k gets smaller.
for the time being, I'll take your word for it .. Michael .. cheers big man .. N 👍
Clever Neville short, to the point and seasonal all rolled into one. Merry Christmas to you and yours
bless you & back at you brother .. 😎🎄👍
Good wishes to you too N. Dovetailing for me and KP is just too swoony! I will spare you the details. lol. Entangled in botox I be.
Thanks you are all 💙
Wow, dear Neville! This is brilliant, concise and well-illuminated! I also concur with our good friend arqios! Here's to entanglement! 🤣 Season's Greetings to you my friend! 🧑🎄🎄
entanglements fine providing it leads to enlightenment .. bless you Tristan .. & back at ya .. Neville 🎅👍
💯 on the fine alliteration there and message! LOL! Bless you too Neville!
You strike a chord for one who is well past the half way mark, those were the days my friend. What would we do without nostalgia?
I know for sure, that I for one, would be irretrievably lost .. that's why I always leave a trail behind me so as to read my way back to the beginning .. Bless you B and enjoy this special day .. Neville
I love your attitude! Happy day to you!
Ah me, forsooth. Twas a time when youth, the visionary, swore on dreams and saw further than the present, and in that reality what wasn't perfect, eh? But aka Goldfinch60 knows half of what my father did and there was NO disappointment. But enough of that. Expertly rendered in a tidy quatrain rhymed to specifications, with lovely imagery to boot and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
You will have to fill me in with the details now Missy, or I wont sleep until circa 2025 ........... Yours Truly, N
Hmm. Both long since buried, what, prithee, wouldst thou know, eh? 9 pregnancies and he swore she was tops to the day of her death. [And he asked around, to boot.]
Nicely penned 👌💯
Well done!
Thank you very much .. Kind Regards, Neville 😎👍
well i hope that the time returns soon, wishing you all the happiness you deserve
many thanks indeed 👍
welcome
have a glorious start to the new year
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