i spied an old man sip his beer
his eyes were glazed full cloudy day
oblivious to all around
he didn’t hear the raucous sound
of other drinkers loud at play
i watched him as he raised his glass
i didn’t miss a tear that fell
that trickled down his weathered skin
i felt another’s suffering
his sadness wrapped me in its spell
where was he in his troubled mind
for sure he wasn’t here with us
his shirt was stained his hair unkempt
i pondered where his thinking went
he drank his pain with little fuss
my thoughts returned to you and i
the reaper is a friend to none
for when you’ve lost your trusted mate
you lose your compass and your fate
lies in the stars your present gone
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- Comment from author about the poem: A real study in loneliness. Touched my heart it did.
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Romantic with relationships and bonds, emphasized a most poetic and beautiful poem
Thank you so much Soren.
https://youtu.be/gxEPV4kolz0?si=81comq171QM02P8v
What a very beautifully rendered illustration of Billy Joel's song! Empathy with delicate imagery and such a subtly haunting poignancy! Thank you very much for sharing, Ma'am. Timely and lovely as your wont.
Thank you dear Missy. I will check out your link.
Ah, witnessed that and been there myself a couple of times or so. A singular moment such as this can perpetual use a feeling, often I forget that we move on and this is part of a many segmented process, our privilege to witness it and document it through poetry is divine, and at times also feels like trespassing into another’s space. I suppose in other forms, stream of consciousness is quite an insight. Thanks for sharing this tender piece. 🙏🏻
Thank you arqios. Pleased you enjoyed.
Most welcome 🙏🏻 Cassie. Have a splendid new year!
A very touching and
poignant poem 😢
and study of loneliness..
Awesomazing
presentation poetess!!🏆
Thank you for sharing!!
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
Thank you so much Thad. All the best.
Oh what a beauty = having just read Accidental Poets posting this morning I'm now in a sad but good mood - great write Cassie.
Thank you so much Michael. All the best.
Such emotive words Cassie, I was that man when my wife died five years ago. I have been so lucky though as I now have Mary in my life.
Andy
I am so pleased you have found Mary. All the best Andy.
It is a beautiful poem and to me personally hits to many cords.
Thank you Tobani. Pleased you liked this poem.
You are very welcome
So deeply beautiful in poetic verse, loneliness, in my early 20's I felt like this, I was lost and alone, I can certainly relate, I even went to the pub alone, your imagery has made me incredibly emotional. Kudos dear Cassie. 🌹
I too felt like that in my early twenties when my parents moved hundreds of miles away and I was in an unfamiliar setting with a small baby. I can see it in the eyes. I recognize it. Thank you dear Teddy. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
A poignant write Cassie.
Meanwhile - now I've lost all my friendships, being horrible to KP. But it has to be done! lol.😮
Poor KP. That’s all I’m gonna say Orchi. . 🙂 and of course a thank you for reading.
They'll be thinking I really am married to KP! lol.
Dearest poet, you are amazing! Seriously, Cassie, is so beautiful, written with empathy and a true artists touch. Your touched heart has touched our hearts. Thank you for this observational and emotional piece of poetry. A favorite for sure, my friend! 🌹👏
Thank you so much for your lovely review Tristen. Truly appreciated.
You’re welcome Cassie! 🙏❤️
Powerful work.
Thank you so much Thomas.
Enjoyable Poem. Makes you think when you see someone sitting there. Just what is his story?
It does make you think Kevin. Thank you so much for stopping by.
it is a very touching description, and i really appreciate your noticing and empathizing with his plight - wonderful poem
Thank you so much Safina. He touched my heart. Happy new year dear poet.
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