Soul Search

Teddy.15

 

 

Moon as far away as infinity

shining down onto soil

shedding light on each path

 

high upon the mountain 

I hear the cries of a lone wolf wandering

cries of loneliness that can be heard here below

cries that lead me to reflect upon my own life

deciding to climb up to the top  

it may take a lifetime to reach its peak?

 

but the cries are ringing in my ears

I’m now following my heart  

I’ll find this wolf

I’ll make friends with her 

putting light in her loneliness 

making light in my own. 

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  • arqios

    Now there is a souls searching that fills both parties and I suspect others as well in between!

    • Teddy.15

      You may have inspired a title thank you dear arqios 🌹

      • arqios

        Not a worry. Wrote it out as it struck me. Sometimes I have howled like the wolf and at other times I have been known to recognise that particular call. So this poem does have a special meaning to existence. Thanks for sharing. I see the apostrophe is quite missing in soul’s up there… I’ve been having some struggles with the touchscreen….

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you so much. 🌹

          • arqios

            You’re welcome Teddy 🙏🏻

          • aDarkerMind

            the soul search has well and truely begun Teddy.

            as touching and as beautiful as ever.

            and I too will make light of my own.

            • Teddy.15

              I'm not sure our souls ever find it all but we as humans have to try, so very grateful for you and your gorgeous poetry, you have taught me so much dear Melvin you also introduced me to Sylvia Plath she really speaks to me. Thank you always for your friendship and your kindness. 🌹

            • sorenbarrett

              Becoming one with one's totem is essential to happiness and completion. The act of sharing one's self with another another essential step to completion, bringing happiness to another yet another step in this process. All mentioned here and in great metaphor

              • Teddy.15

                Yes by speaking to myself I'm speaking to everyone, hey we do have wolves here, close by I'm yet to hear their cry. Thank you dearest sorrenbarret I absolutely love your wonderful mind dissections, you always see everything. No pressure sir. 🤣 🌹

              • Accidental Poet

                Been doing a lot of that lately.

                • Teddy.15

                  It's a time of year that I suspect many of us do dear A.P 🌹

                  • Accidental Poet

                    I suppose you're right Teddy. Have to take the good with the bad. 🤔

                  • Michael Edwards

                    We all like to search I'm lucky I guess - I achieved all that Id hoped for in my profession, had a wonderful life, great children wjho look out for me - and now I'm able to indulge myself doing exactly awhat I want to do - art, poetry, crafts, gardening, and, of course there's Stanley who is currently asleep across my arm asleep and making it difficult to tpe this - so much to live for. Sorry - I've gone off beam a bit.

                    • Teddy.15

                      🤣 awe I understand and I think Stanley is very lucky to have you as his master and best buddy, thank you for your gorgeous review, so very happy to know you are at peace with your lot dearest Michael 🌹

                    • Bella Shepard

                      Reaching the top of the mountain is well worth the journey. Dear Teddy you have truly reached the summit in this beautiful and inspiring poem. The picture truly captures its essence, you amaze me.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Thank you my dear Bella, loads of love to you my dear friend. 🤗 🌹

                      • Cassie58

                        Beautiful dear Teddy. We are all on a journey. Do we ever find what completely satisfies the soul? I wonder. Hope your Sunday has been peaceful and satisfying. 🌹

                        • Teddy.15

                          I don't believe we could ever be 100% satisfied that would be far too easy dear Cassie, thank you so much dear friend. 🌹 A soul twist and turns just like the outer shell. ❤️

                        • Jerry Reynolds

                          A fine inspiring write, Teddy.

                          • Teddy.15

                            Thank you dear Jerry, I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas. 🌹

                          • Tristan Robert Lange

                            The metaphor here is just magnificent dear Teddy! First, I love wolves. Absolutely love them. My first tattoo was of a lone wolf baying to the moon! Also, I have oft felt like a lone wolf in my life for various different reasons. This poem, for me, is both a call to get in touch with one's self to search one's own soul, find it, befriend it, etc, as well as a call to reach out to those lonely souls out there who could use a friend, a little light and some hope...all found in the caring presence of another. So, wow 🤯. This my friend is art...and it is beautiful! 🌹👏

                            • Teddy.15

                              One of the most gracious reviews I've ever had dear Tristan, you can see into my work with binoculars my friend. There is something so very special about the lone wolf, maybe they represent strength because they are not in a pack, thank you so much I am overwhelmed by your words. 🌹

                            • Thomas W Case

                              Beautiful work. The longing is palpable.

                              • Teddy.15

                                Thank you dear Thomas, there were times especially at Christmas time where I was truly alone in every sense. 🌹

                              • Thad Wilk

                                A fantastic poem,
                                thought provoking indeed! 🐺
                                You'll find this wolf
                                In your soul search
                                one day I am sure! 😊
                                Strong feelings,
                                skillfully expressed poetess!
                                Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🧸. Thad

                                • Teddy.15

                                  Thank you dear Thad, so very kind of you. 🌹

                                • Goldfinch60

                                  wonderful words Teddy. may we all hear the beauty of your howl from above to tell us you are with us all.

                                  Andy

                                  • Teddy.15

                                    Mind your windows then. 🤣 Thank you dear Andy. 🌹



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