Another day comes,
I rise into this new day
Showing all is well
And another brand new day
Enters into my long life.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Every new day I arise is special.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
Love these forms and keep forgetting about them - must write a few - thanks for the inspiration.
Thank you Michael, so glad that you enjoy the style.
Andy
Great message Andy every day is a new one and a fresh start.
So very true soren, thank you.
Andy
Another day another opportunity. wonderful salute to the sun
Very true David, thank you.
Andy
Like fine vintage and never runs dry!
Wonderful meaning arqios, thank you.
Andy
🙏🏻🕊
And may there be sun on the isle of white ☀️
It was but we are off home to day but we will return here in March.
Andy
A wonderful Tanka
poem, a great read! 💫
Short and succinct and
captivating indeed!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Most kind Thad, thank you.
Andy
I'm not too familiar with these types of poems. Anything other than a haiku, is over my head. But, a fine write! 🙂
They are an extended type of haiku 5,7,5,7,7 Tom. Thank you for your kind words Tom.
Andy
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