Carefully worded this poem speaks the truth in deep wisdom. Our love takes us up and down not the one loved. It is such a great metaphor the balloon. Love we do float on in its ups and downs. Wonderfully brilliant!
So very kind, dearest sorrenbarret you know I'm speaking of my most beloved darling of all right? London but yes also your way so very wonderful you know my work so well. I'm always truly humbled ๐
A lovely,
touching and
romantic write!! ๐๐๐
Delightfully woven
and a treat to recite!!๐
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes ๐ ๐ค๐น Thad
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Lovely writing like how you used picture to inspire your poem .
A lovely poem
I write my poems then find the art, thank you ๐
Carefully worded this poem speaks the truth in deep wisdom. Our love takes us up and down not the one loved. It is such a great metaphor the balloon. Love we do float on in its ups and downs. Wonderfully brilliant!
So very kind, dearest sorrenbarret you know I'm speaking of my most beloved darling of all right? London but yes also your way so very wonderful you know my work so well. I'm always truly humbled ๐
Love that floaty feeling. And when there is art out there that exudes the same feeling there is a sense of unity in the cosmos. ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐
Thank you so much dear Arqios ๐น
This is beautiful, sweet Teddy. Philosophical too. Fantastic work.
Thank you for a very kind review dear Thomas. ๐น
Perhaps indeed. All too often left in limbo. Nice work.
Thank you so much dear Dan. ๐น
A lovely,
touching and
romantic write!! ๐๐๐
Delightfully woven
and a treat to recite!!๐
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes ๐ ๐ค๐น Thad
Your rhyming ๐คฃ thank you dear Thad. ๐น
A lyrical joy - great to read out loud.
Humbled indeed, it's about London. Whom I love deeply ๐คฃ ๐น
May that love go on for eternity Teddy,
Andy
Thank you it will, it was where I was born and raised. ๐น๐ฌ๐งโค๏ธ
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