Measures

Teddy.15

 

And, because of the
very measure of my love
I cannot put you down
nor can I bring you up
we are simply left in limbo 
a balloon you are not 
If I was born to love you
I will die loving you 
alas, from near or far 
when the wind blows north
my heart will blow onto yours 
and I may just float, perhaps?
 
 
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  • Caring dove

    Lovely writing like how you used picture to inspire your poem .

    A lovely poem

    • Teddy.15

      I write my poems then find the art, thank you ๐Ÿ’•

    • sorenbarrett

      Carefully worded this poem speaks the truth in deep wisdom. Our love takes us up and down not the one loved. It is such a great metaphor the balloon. Love we do float on in its ups and downs. Wonderfully brilliant!

      • Teddy.15

        So very kind, dearest sorrenbarret you know I'm speaking of my most beloved darling of all right? London but yes also your way so very wonderful you know my work so well. I'm always truly humbled ๐Ÿ’œ

      • arqios

        Love that floaty feeling. And when there is art out there that exudes the same feeling there is a sense of unity in the cosmos. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you so much dear Arqios ๐ŸŒน

        • Thomas W Case

          This is beautiful, sweet Teddy. Philosophical too. Fantastic work.

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you for a very kind review dear Thomas. ๐ŸŒน

          • Dan Williams

            Perhaps indeed. All too often left in limbo. Nice work.

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you so much dear Dan. ๐ŸŒน

            • Thad Wilk

              A lovely,
              touching and
              romantic write!! ๐ŸŽˆ๐Ÿ˜๐ŸŽˆ
              Delightfully woven
              and a treat to recite!!๐Ÿ˜Š
              Thanks for sharing poetess!!
              Best wishes ๐Ÿ€ ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน Thad

              • Teddy.15

                Your rhyming ๐Ÿคฃ thank you dear Thad. ๐ŸŒน

              • Michael Edwards

                A lyrical joy - great to read out loud.

                • Teddy.15

                  Humbled indeed, it's about London. Whom I love deeply ๐Ÿคฃ ๐ŸŒน

                • Goldfinch60

                  May that love go on for eternity Teddy,

                  Andy

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you it will, it was where I was born and raised. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡งโค๏ธ



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