A Rose Without Thorns (senryu)

Teddy.15

special English rose 

 

that glows with beauty and grace
 
 
tall as a mountain.
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  • Michael Edwards

    Nice one Teddy - one of my favourite forms x

    • Teddy.15

      So very kind, cassie58 told me she doesn't write about herself so I took this opportunity to write about her, as it is what I see of her, thank you my dear Mr Edwards. 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and very clever Teddy

      • Teddy.15

        Thank you dearest sorrenbarret, it's for Cassie. 🌹 🌹 Could also be for you as you are truly wonderful too. 🌹

      • arqios

        Oh nice! Cassie is one such English rose 🌹 ! Quite succinct but packed with so much, abounding beautiful grace. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear arqios 🌹

          • arqios

            You’re welcome Teddy πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

          • Cassie58

            You dear Teddy are so very generous and thoughtful. This is a beautiful senryu. I am touched that you wrote this for me. A lovely kindness. This red rose has no thorns which has some symbolism. A rose without thorns shows some vulnerability. The thorns are there for protection. I can own up to feeling vulnerable at times. A huge thank you dear friend. 🌹

            • Teddy.15

              This really was the easiest senryu I've ever written, so I took the challenge to give something to you dear friend, you truly are the rose of this site my dear friend. 🌹 ❀️

            • Thomas W Case

              Beauty, sweet Teddy. Reminds me of My English Rose by The Jam. Good memories.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you so much sweet Thomas. 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                Beautiful senryu Teddy.

                Andy

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you dear Andy. 🌹



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