each new day brings dreams
dreams can come true if you dare
so, dare to believe.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Senryu 5/7/5 syllables focus on emotions. š¹
- Category: Reflection
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A beautiful and optimistic senryu, enjoyed the read. Made it negative (because I make everything negative):
A nightmarish dream
Lashes out with such fury
Forever Iām scared
Inspiring your senryu is a positive even though yours is negative, it's brilliant and true to how we can absolutely feel, I'm glad you have been a part of this one. š¹
To dream is believing in yourself. š¹šš
Believe in you dear A.P I certainly do, and if we didn't dream well, wouldn't it be a darker place. š¹ Thank you dear friend. š¹
I can't see, help, I can't see. Try opening your eyes AP. Oh, yeah right. š
Another lovely senryu of a most positive nature to begin the day. Dream on I say
Thank you my dear sorrenbarret, I will never stop dreaming. š¹ š
A great write bur wouldn't work for me - I can never remember my dreams š
It's metaphor for make your desires come true. š¤£
Oooh - my desires1 I'll have to get the manual out to remind me1 ššš
š¤£ how to make the world's funniest Limerick? š Biggest of hugs dearest Michael š¹
Beautiful message of positivity dear Teddy. We all need to wish upon a star and hope our dreams come true. We all need something to look forward to, especially when the going gets tough. š¹
We certainly do dear Cassie, you have put it perfectly. Thank you dear friend š¹š“ó §ó ¢ó „ó ®ó §ó æš¹šš¤
I believe Teddy.
Andy
I know you do, in fact this was inspired by your positivity. Thank you dearest Andy. š¹
such a beautiful and awesome message
yes, we should all dare
Thank you so much dear NafisaSB š¹
you are most welcome.
take care, and keep composing..all the best
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