Love Seeds
You may well ask why
I am busy,
planting all these little
love seeds in
terracotta flowerpots ..
And why
I sprinkle them each day
with new hope
and with fresh rain drops ..
Well it just goes
to show and to prove that
I can learn
how to love and to trust
her again and not
give up on her completely ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Published: January 26th, 2025 05:25
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 51
- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Cassie58
Comments9
I don't have much of a green thumb. But seriously you have touched on an area much needed in relationships today and one much neglected that of trust. The metaphor is great in that trust like a plant grows slowly day to day dependent on its nurturance. It is much easier to though out a sick plant and get a new one but I find that the next will suffer the fate of the first. Trust is a two way street and both people are responsible for its growth. Great poem Neville
many thanks my friend .. I couldn't possibly ask for more ..
We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
Many thanks arqios .. Neville 😎
Hey N! Hope all s well your way, kinda missing your banter and spark. Or perhaps the sunnies are a sign of a laidback coolness, which is quite fine as well 👍🕊️
A poetic gem - great write with a great message.
Thanks a bundle Michael .. Neville
A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.
............................... Shame ....................... on you 🌻
Excellent write Nevilie
Cheers Tony .. 😎👍
You're welcome
I certainly wish you well, you'd be a better man than me. Good work here.
Thanks Dan .. 😎👍
Keep planting Neville all will grow fine.
Andy
I just bought a rotovator .. Cheers .. 👍
Powerful work. Great metaphor and symbolism.
Thanks a ton Thomas 😎👍
and not to give up on her completely..loved it
Absolutely .. Many thanks my friend .. Neville 🌻👍
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