Love Seeds

Neville

Love Seeds

 

You may well ask why

I am busy,

planting all these little

love seeds in

   terracotta flowerpots ..

And why

I sprinkle them each day

with new hope

   and with fresh rain drops ..

Well it just goes

to show and to prove that

I can learn

how to love and to trust

her again and not

   give up on her completely ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 26th, 2025 05:25
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 51
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  • sorenbarrett

    I don't have much of a green thumb. But seriously you have touched on an area much needed in relationships today and one much neglected that of trust. The metaphor is great in that trust like a plant grows slowly day to day dependent on its nurturance. It is much easier to though out a sick plant and get a new one but I find that the next will suffer the fate of the first. Trust is a two way street and both people are responsible for its growth. Great poem Neville

    • Neville



      many thanks my friend .. I couldn't possibly ask for more ..

    • arqios

      We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻

      • Neville



        Many thanks arqios .. Neville 😎

        • arqios

          Hey N! Hope all s well your way, kinda missing your banter and spark. Or perhaps the sunnies are a sign of a laidback coolness, which is quite fine as well 👍🕊️

        • Michael Edwards

          A poetic gem - great write with a great message.

          • Neville


            Thanks a bundle Michael .. Neville

          • orchidee

            A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.

            • Neville



              ............................... Shame ....................... on you 🌻

            • Tony36

              Excellent write Nevilie

              • Neville


                Cheers Tony .. 😎👍

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Dan Williams

                  I certainly wish you well, you'd be a better man than me. Good work here.

                  • Neville



                    Thanks Dan .. 😎👍

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Keep planting Neville all will grow fine.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      I just bought a rotovator .. Cheers .. 👍

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Powerful work. Great metaphor and symbolism.

                      • Neville

                        Thanks a ton Thomas 😎👍

                      • SJSangeetha

                        and not to give up on her completely..loved it

                        • Neville


                          Absolutely .. Many thanks my friend .. Neville 🌻👍



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