1,2, & 3 from 575s and 57577s
A place to ponder
with vast views across mountains
in silence and peace.
Dry stone walls which dip
in valleys like arteries
lead the roving eye
to follow unending scenes
which time does not extinguish.
Earliest autumn
idyllic meditations
warm and benign days.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Gone all serious today - from set of these recently written
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Good write and pic M. You checked those (sylla) berles here?! I'm learning a bit about art - vanishing points, perspectives, etc.
Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a none too subtle haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Missy.
Adept at either length or depth, a truly gifted ‘quilling.’ 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
Cheers and would you believe I still use an old fashioned ink pen and have run out of blotting paper - also do use a quill sometimes in my artwork - love the unpredictability of it as it splashes on the paper.
Yep, I remember the grubby nails and fingers as I began training in calligraphy between 9-10 years of age…. All those nibs and cursives,! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
Oh dear Fibonacci numbers, mining for bit coin? lol This one has more depth to it that needs mining and smelting and refining. A gold mine perhaps.
Such an elegant response which could be turned into a super 575 by your skilled pen I'm sure.
Which ever way you go your poetry is superb 🌹
Aw thanks 👍
You have delivered well here. Fine poetry. I like your serious. Happy Sunday.
So kind Cassie x
Good ones Michael, I would interpret them as Haiku, Tanka, Senryu.
Andy
I think you may be right Andy - being a bit of a coward I always hesitate to give them names as there will always be a pedantic purist out there who might take issue.
A fine write, and I see in the comments, that is your artwork too? Bravo! Superb work all round.
Yes - all the pictures that accompany my poems are mine - I'm an artist first and foremost - thanks from looking in Tom.
I am so impressed, Michael. Art is one of those things, I would love to be able to do. Like playing the piano. Very well done on both the painting and the poems.
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