Poetry Shouldn't

Tom Dylan


Notice of absence from Tom Dylan
Sorry if there is a delay in responses. Sometimes life gets in the way. As John Lennon said, life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.

Poetry shouldn’t be read

like a shopping list

or a text message,

like a newspaper headline,

or that recipe for spag-bol,

or a social media post.

 

Poetry should be read

like wedding vows

or raising a glass for a funeral toast

or congratulations it’s a girl

or when my wife says

love, I’ve been thinking.

  • Author: Tom Dylan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 4th, 2025 03:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: I was trying to get down how I try to read poetry more closely and deeply than other written forms.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Yes, and if shorter poems, they may focus us more. Yet at times longer poems can do - say 5,347 verses or something! lol. No need to go mad over it.

    • Tom Dylan

      Yes, Orchi, exactly that. Some short poems really pack a punch. Cheers, Tom.

    • arqios

      It's both an art and a skill, just as crafting a poem so is the reading (constructing.deconstructing - to be sterile and technical, but not) You're on fire Tom šŸ™šŸ»šŸ‘šŸ•Šļø!

      • Tom Dylan

        That is a good point. The reading of a poem is a skill just as writing one. Thanks so much for the encouragement. Really appreciated.

        • arqios

          Much welcome my friend! Hope all is well your way šŸ‘šŸ™šŸ»šŸ•Šļø

        • sorenbarrett

          A great and too often neglected message in this poem. I agree whole heartedly. The meaning of the poem is not just in its rhyme, but in its wording, pacing and meter as well intonation and emphasis. Like a song that can be sang note perfect it is different when sang from the soul with soul. Very nice

          • Tom Dylan

            Yes, this occurred to me so decided to try and write about it. Thanks so much for your comments, Soren. Really appreciated.

          • Poetic Licence

            I feel it is pointless reading a poem if you are not going to try and understand it, i am learning it takes time to work out some pieces of work( even i do not always get it, but i try). It is also what the author deserves, time and effort has gone into writing it after all, enjoyed the read

            • Tom Dylan

              Yes, that is exactly it. I wrote this poem, kinda to myself, to tell myself, that if I do not crack a poem first time of reading, I should take a step back, and read it again with the proper mindset. Thanks as always for your comments. Really appreciated.

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • Cassie58

                Expression is everything when reading poetry, as is timing. Been a while since I read at open mic. It takes practice. Some people have the advantage of a great voice. Iā€™m not one of them. Enjoyed your composition here Tom. Made me reflect. Happy Tuesday.

                • Tom Dylan

                  Thanks a lot for your comments, Cassie. Really appreciated. Happy Tuesday to you too. Cheers, Tom.

                • Tony36

                  BRAVO

                  • Tom Dylan

                    Thanks, mate, appreciated.

                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome Tom

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So true Tom, poetry must be inhaled.

                      Andy

                      • Tom Dylan

                        Exactly, Andy. Or maybe sipped with a little ice! šŸ™‚ Thanks, Tom.

                      • Kevin Hulme

                        A Wonderful way of saying how Poetry should be expressed. Good one.

                        • Tom Dylan

                          Thanks a lot, Kevin. Really appreciate your comments. Cheers, Tom.



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