Peace Off

Tom Dylan


Notice of absence from Tom Dylan
Sorry if there is a delay in responses. Sometimes life gets in the way. As John Lennon said, life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.

You float around the office in your kimono

bidding people Namaste,

but you’re the nasty office gossip,

who always has something to say.

 

In the evenings you teach meditation

showing people how to breathe,

but the way you treat your work-mates,

it’s no wonder they all leave.

 

You practise meditation and mindfulness

teaching Yoga and Tai Chi,

but you growl and snarl at colleagues

while sipping your green tea.

 

Actually I think I’ve got it figured out,

while you aren’t quite the hippy you portray

you are a little ray of sunshine

as long you’re getting your own way.

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  • orchidee

    Doh! Good write Tom.

    • Tom Dylan

      Thanks, mate. Appreciated. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • sorenbarrett

      The duality displayed in hypocracy driven by narcissism. Well written with images of all. Very nice

      • Tom Dylan

        They portray themselves as this hippy, peace and love type person, but if you remove the token hippy tropes, they are a nasty piece of work. I tried to get this down in a poem. Thanks so much for your comments, Soren. Really appreciated.

      • Poetic Licence

        The practice of practice what you preach, i have certainly worked for people like this is the past, thinking they are way and above their station, enjoyed the read

        • Tom Dylan

          They have themselves down as this lovely person because they do Yoga and meditate. They should try treating people a little better. Thanks so much for your comments. Really appreciated. Cheers, Tom.

          • Poetic Licence

            You are very welcome

          • arqios

            Well, to be fair, the Sun does get its wayโ€ฆeventuallyโ€ฆ so theyโ€™d kinda make a perfect pair. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

            • Tom Dylan

              Haha, yes and if you get too close you get burned! Nice one. ๐Ÿ™‚

              • arqios

                Kimono or not! Fire is truly hot ๐Ÿ”ฅ ๐Ÿฅต

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Aint' that the way it is? Sad but true. I have known people like this. Well done, Tom.

                • Tom Dylan

                  Thanks so much, Tristan. Really appreciate your comments.

                • Tony36

                  Excellent write Tom

                  • Tom Dylan

                    Thanks a lot, mate. Really appreciated.

                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome

                    • Neville


                      I feel sure we all know one or two who fit the bill .. I do love this little number Tom ..

                      • Tom Dylan

                        This one kinda wrote itself. ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks a lot for your comments, mate. Really appreciated.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        There are many lie that Tom, just treat them with apathy.

                        Andy

                        • Tom Dylan

                          Spot on, Andy. Thanks for your comments.

                        • Accidental Poet

                          Sounds like an attention starved Narcissist to me. What he needs is a big cup of "Get a Life". ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

                          • Tom Dylan

                            Could not agree more, AP. Thanks for your comments. Really appreciated.

                          • Thomas W Case

                            Hypocrisy, alive and well. Great work, Tom.

                            • Tom Dylan

                              Thanks so much, brother. Really appreciated.

                            • Cheeky Missy

                              Oh my word! You were not allowed to make me laugh so hard!!! My la. Waxing eloquent describing reality, with an adroit flick of the wrist rendering side-splitting what accomplishes exactly what we know too painfully well, this takes the cake. You're a regular riot! Thank you so VERY much. I love, love, LOVE it!

                              • Tom Dylan

                                This was one of those times when my grumbling kinda turned into lines that rhyme. Thanks so much for your comments, Missy. Really appreciated. Cheers, Tom.

                              • RSM0812

                                Your write proves some people are only about themselves.



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