Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
Since this thirst
could not
be quenched,
by all the sweat
you have
ever yet shed
and regardless,
of whether
upon your long
toiling,
lovemaking or
on so very many
battlefields ..
I hasten to warn
thee it is
still far too sweet
for this
hunger of mine
and I do
occasionally fear,
that it can
no longer be sated ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments7
Love neologisms! They keep language alive and up to date!
..................................................Flank yez lowds 😎👍
Wonderful neologism. Well done, my friend. Cheers! 🍻
Bloss yez Tristan 😎👍
That is a write that has made this old mind stop and think, and that makes it enjoyable to read
.......................................... thank you PL .. 😎👍
You are very welcome
Isn't that what poetry is know for? Creating new words, how many did Shakespeare create? Sometimes one can not get enough of a good thing. A very nicely worded poem with great lines from the very first sentence that sets the tone and is so nicely enriched and completed in the last line. This poem has no loose ends. Very nice Neville
Thanks a bullion bruvva .. Neville
Comprehendfully poetimagery (I tried... when I found out wot a neologism woz...)
Strewth you old pup you .. Cheers & them sum two 😎👍
Sometimes, we just can't get enough of the blood, sweat, and tears. Ain't love grand. - Phil A.
Undubitantly my dear fround .. Neville 😎👍
It will be sated in time Neville.
Andy
if the satistics run in my favour .. who knows .. 😉👍
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