Too much

sorenbarrett

More than my share of lemons, I drank too much lemonade
Too many of sun's hot demons, I spent too much time in the shade
Far too long the hours of labor, excessive burns from hot sun
Too many a nosey neighbor, false friendships by the ton

So many memories of young children, ah... and how many old dogs
Too much time, hope buildin', too often seeing it sink in despair's bogs
More than enough pockets empty, given so many handouts of pity
Too often on court dockets, too many pleas handled by committee

An overflowing plate of abuse, wiped clean, with a cloth of warm sun rays
More anger than a hungry heart can use, a surplus of planted days
More than a fair share of tears, too many years of strife with a loving wife
An overabundance of fears, I've seen enough of a beautiful life

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  • MDStone

    Soren,
    We certainly live in days and times where too much happens too often. Ah, but taking time to reflect, that can remind that this too shall pass. There is too much yet to be seen, too much good to do, too much to say and write, to give up on the beautiful life. Thanks for taking me through this time to reflection and refocus.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you so much for the read and kind words that are always most appreciated. Your words are most valued. Sometimes after a good meal we are just too full to eat more.

    • Salvia.S

      This is so powerful and emotional. Your words paint a vivid picture of resilience and the human struggle. Very moving.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you so much for your words of support and kind encouragement they are most valued.

      • Mutley Ravishes

        The last two lines, Soren. Really hit.
        Life? I guess we all seen more than enough of this one. Time for a different dimension?!

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much for the read Mutley and your comments are most valued.

        • arqios

          Sweetened citrus acids can have challenging effects when taken in large quantities 🙏🏻🕊

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks so much Cryptic you are so right too much of anything can lead to rejection. Appreciate you read and understanding remarks. They are most appreciated.

            • arqios

              Most welcome Soren 🙏🏻🕊

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Flows and rings beautifully. A wonderful expression of time, struggle, and the beautiful yet puzzling futility of it all. 🌹👏 Well done, Soren. This gets a fave!

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks so much Tristan you hit the core of this piece. What does it all mean anyway except the moment and enjoyment of the hear and now. Appreciate your read and comment.

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Indeed. You are most welcome, Soren!

                • Friendship

                  Life is a journey, Soren, and your poem reminds me that every experience, no matter how challenging, is an opportunity for growth. The metaphor of 'more than my share of lemons' beautifully illustrates life's hardships, while 'lemonade' symbolizes our resilience and ability to find sweetness in adversity. Phrases like 'hope building'' and 'false friendships by the ton' encourage us to stay hopeful and focused on meaningful connections. Your poem inspires us to tap into our imagination and creativity, embracing the power to shape our reality. By exploring themes of nostalgia, the passage of time, and the emotional toll of relationships and experiences, your poem reminds us that joy and sorrow are intertwined and that every moment is a chance to learn, grow, and find beauty.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Couldn't have said it better. So true life is made up of sweet and sour both to enjoyed and compliment each other. And when one has eaten and is full one wants no more. Thanks so much for the read and comment it is appreciated as always

                  • Poetic Licence

                    The good and the bad, the successes and the failure's, the love and the hate, the despair and the hope, all wrapped up in this wonderful write, enjoyed the read

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks you so much my friend for the read and the understanding comment they are highly valued

                      • Poetic Licence

                        You are very welcome

                      • Teddy.15

                        So wonderful, i believe you with all my heart

                        Love every line especially the ending

                        Too many of sun's hot demons, I spent too much time in the shade

                        Oh I like this very much, inspiring words.

                        🌹

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thank you Teddy for the encouraging words of support they are most appreciated my friend.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Clever words soren showing both sides of life.

                          Andy

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you so much Andy your words are appreciated.

                          • gray0328

                            The complexities of life and the resilience needed to get through them
                            Well Done Soren

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thanks so much Gray for the read and kind words of support they are as always appreciated.



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