To the Greeks weaving was an allegory, of the art of poetry
Ovid's poetry reviled, by Augustus who had him exiled
Arachne mortal weaver sublime, hubris was her crime
So her art to scuttle, Athena beat her with her shuttle
Following the game the dame hung herself in shame
With pity Athena eyed her, then turned her into a spider
Cobwebs cling to me, lingering threads of what used to be
Memories broken pulled away glisten in the light of day
Strands once woven with care, fragments sticky tickle of despair
Pieces of what once was home now floating in air do roam
Hairs grown and cut, where happy life on eight legs did strut
Spun webs of lost communication now fall in trailing separation
Once a glistening pattern of lies, now swept, empty truth catches no flies
In sticky silk memories caught, lie my words under dust forgot
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Good write SB. I find Greek mythology stories eccentric, weird, horrific too in places. They are surely only myths. There are some horrible things in some of the stories.
Thanks Orchi I love mythology in general for it's metaphors and archetypes. Thanks so much for the read and comment Orchi.
Exquisite poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 so very beautiful. 🌹
Thanks Teddy as always appreciate the read and kind words. Thought I would try something a bit different in form this time.
Brings to life how the ancients envisioned their world and time that they lived in. 🙏🏻🕊️
Thanks Cryptic for the read and comment. Not sure we are that much different, we just think we are more advanced. Wonder what they will be saying about us and our thoughts in tow to three thousand years.
That’s entirely the point! We look afar (humanity) to glean and glimpse at things up close 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊️
Wow!!!
A beautiful and emotional exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. The way you weave together mythology and personal reflection is truly captivating.
Well written.
Thank you so much Salvia for the review and most kind words they are always appreciated
Cobwebs cling to me, lingering threads of what used to be
Memories broken pulled away glisten in the light of day
Strands once woven with care, fragments sticky tickle of despair
Pieces of what once was home now floating in air do roam
Wow! Soren, that’s all I can say is WOW. Great wording and writing. I hung there suspended on threads of the web, remembering. Thanks for sharing this great piece of art.
You are too kind and your words like alcohol intoxicate and fuel the flame of hubris. I must be careful not to be burned. Many thanks and best wishes for a wonderful day.
A story of reflection the Greek way!!, beautifully written and some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much for the read my friend and so appreciate the comment.
You are very welcome
Soren, this is a masterful weaving of myth and metaphor. You’ve spun a "web of words" that captures the essence of poetry, punishment, and the lingering threads of memory. The way you’ve connected Arachne’s tale to the poet’s craft is brilliant, my friend! Your final stanzas weave vivid designs of memories clinging like cobwebs, once intricate patterns now broken and floating. I resonate with that...a powerfully evocative reflection on the fragility of our past and the stories we tell. Beautifully crafted, my friend. This gets a fave for sure. 🌹👏
Thank you so much Tristan for the read and most generous words of support they are truly valued.
You are most welcome, my friend.
Great write
Thank you so much Tony your read and comment are most appreciated
You're welcome
Absolutely beautiful! A true work of art
Thank you Ninja your words are most valued.
The Greeks sure had many Gods.I liked the idea of weaving.Excellent
Thank you David for your review and comment it is most appreciated
A põem of sad reflection. I very much admire the references to Greek mythology and the imagery surrounding those cobwebs is captivating. A wonderful poem Sorenbarrett.
Thank you Cassie for the review and words of support they are always appreciated.
Wonderful words soren, those words of the past can be so meaningful.
Andy
Thanks so much Andy for the review and positive words they are valued
Such a narrative, punchy opening.
Bravo!
Thank you very much for the read and kind words of support they are most appreciated.
Wow. Just wow.
Thank you very much for your read and comment on this piece it is appreciated
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