Writers Doubt.
Thoughts to paper as your mind starts to unravel.
All your words and feelings start to slowly travel.
In some form or other they will eventually arrive.
As the poetic words gradually starts to come alive.
They flow freely like a tap of pure cleansing water.
Fears, thoughts and emotions all brought together.
When you read back then comes the writer’s doubt.
Will anyone connect with what it is really all about.
Does it make common sense or is it just confusing.
Are the words from the heart or just another illusion.
Do the words really mean what you think they mean.
Will the true meaning of your write be clearly seen.
What happens if there is no one who understands it.
There`s a chance they think your poems are just shit.
It could be possible that no one will read you're write.
Will that cause worry and play on your mind at night.
People could well like it, shower you positive praise.
Just as easily their thoughts could be the other way.
It’s possible they won’t like; rejection can give pain.
Will you think twice before you decide to write again.
Don’t worry if they see something you haven't seen.
Maybe you gave too much of your constant dreams.
You could be surprised at the words that you write.
Not knowing that’s how you’re really feeling inside.
Although all the words might leave your soul bare.
Be proud that your words you are willing to share.
When the words are of value and meaning to you.
Then writing with truth and vigour is all you can do.
Don't doubt the words that come out of your head.
It eases life and puts some of the emotions to bed.
I do not write for pleasure or gain, I just right for me.
Though I am happy if some pleasure people receive.
So, keep your pen to the paper let all the words out.
Do not look back and don't ever have writer’s doubt.
I feel better now as I have cleared my jumbled head.
I think I’m out of words, because it has all been said.
Tobani 2024.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I was nervous about putting my poetry out onto a site like this, so before i did late last year, i wrote this poem to myself to convince me to do it. I do not know if others have had the same concerns, but i was very hesitant, though now i am very glad i chose to list my poems.
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Ohh, just follow me - write any old rubbish, as I do at intervals! LOL. Now, now, poets, I didn't say rubbish my EVERY poem! Heehee.
But seriously, we can sometimes write poems hoping they will 'fit in' and be acceptable to others. But we can't please all the people all of the time, and we would lose our individuality if we tried to do that, I think. And that's quite a long word for this time of day - individuality. Got headache now, thinking that word up! lol.
I totally agree with all of that, thankfully I have never written to please, I just write whats in my head. I thank you for your kind feedback,I hope you have a wonderful weekend
What a splendid poem that rings with truth in every line. How many times I have had readers tell me the exact opposite of what I had intended and I've asked myself did I word it wrong? or were they not reading it carefully? Long ago I decided that there is no correct interpretation of a poem all interpretations are correct it each reader's eyes. The question is did it touch someone? Even the author? A fave
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Some greta wisdom here mi amigo.Never doubt yourself.You are a great wordsmith
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Pretty much found my concerns nestled within your stanzas. 🙏🏻🕊️
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You’re welcome friend 🙏🏻🕊️
No matter what we write we know so little of each other.
Great write!
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Nicely worded.Your poem delves into the transformative experience of channeling thoughts and emotions into written words, highlighting the writer's inner journey of self-discovery, the pursuit of connection, and the quest for validation, ultimately inspiring the writer to embrace their creative voice.
Have agreat weekend,
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I did fear sharing my poetry prior to doing it, for a whole variety of reasons, most of which you have covered in this poem. First, wonderful poem, my friend. Second, I am so glad you wrote it to yourself and ended up convincing yourself to come on here! It's been great getting to read your excellent poetry and get to know each other as best as we can digitally! This poem is a fave for me. Have a great weekend, Tobani! 🌹👏❤️
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You are welcome, my friend!
What a brave and encouraging piece of writing, with a voice of experience that shares the keys to character. Heroic
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Such true words Tobani, we can interpret our own and others poetry in differing ways every time we read them, that is the beauty of writing our words.
Andy
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You're hereby as charming as dear Shakespeare, this carefully delineated injunction to self, which aught to resonate with countless, eloquently rendering reality in more than simply this genre. This baring of the soul, as you've excellently rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delightful poignancy, is a serious thing indeed. I guess I'd honestly never have found the chutzpa to enter a local poetry group nine years ago if I hadn't first found sweet camaraderie online. Thank you very, very much for sharing. I love it.
Thank you for your wonderful review of this piece of writing, I very much appreciate it
My pleasure. You're more than welcome.
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