Soul 2

Teddy.15

 

 

She hovers over me

I cannot see her 

but I feel her presence 

I know she’s there

I can feel her everywhere I go

I feel her warmth 

I feel a glow of sunshine

all around me  

her aura I can sense 

graceful like the brightest orchid 

and in all the flowers

that bloom

in the sky when it's blue  

and as I skate on a frozen lake

I know how lucky I am

because this soul belongs to me.

 
 
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 18th, 2025 05:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote a dark piece about the Soul, this is the brighter version. Happy Easter to all. 🌹
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 50
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments7

  • sorenbarrett

    Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A brighter poem for a season that represents brightness and a return form the grave. Lovely my friend.

    • Teddy.15

      Awe, that's a beautiful review dearest sorrenbarret, thank you so much dear friend. 🌹

    • Jerry Reynolds

      A fine writing, Teddy. A fine coffee read.

      • Teddy.15

        Ah, I'm so glad I convinced you over the sweet smell of morning coffee 🤣 thank you dear Jerry. 🌹

      • Thomas W Case

        Beautiful work Teddy, from a beautiful soul.

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you darling Poet, right back at you. 🌹

        • Michael Edwards

          Teddy sounds an amazing lady 🤣❤️

          • Teddy.15

            lol oh I'm not just a lady 🤣 thank you dear Michael, may your Easter be so very kind to you dear friend. 🌹

          • Goldfinch60

            Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.

            An dy

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you dear Andy 🌹

            • teardrop

              Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.

              • Teddy.15

                Awe, thank you dear Teardrop 🌹

              • NafisaSB

                if the person is innately good, the aura is bound to be bright
                may yours always shine...

                • Teddy.15

                  May yours too my friend. 🌹

                  • NafisaSB

                    thank you. God bless you



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