Soul 2

Teddy.15

 

 

She hovers over me

I cannot see her 

but I feel her presence 

I know she’s there

I can feel her everywhere I go

I feel her warmth 

I feel a glow of sunshine

all around me  

her aura I can sense 

graceful like the brightest orchid 

and in all the flowers

that bloom

in the sky when it's blue  

and as I skate on a frozen lake

I know how lucky I am

because this soul belongs to me.

 
 
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 18th, 2025 05:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote a dark piece about the Soul, this is the brighter version. Happy Easter to all. 🌹
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 62
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A brighter poem for a season that represents brightness and a return form the grave. Lovely my friend.

    • Teddy.15

      Awe, that's a beautiful review dearest sorrenbarret, thank you so much dear friend. 🌹

    • Jerry Reynolds

      A fine writing, Teddy. A fine coffee read.

      • Teddy.15

        Ah, I'm so glad I convinced you over the sweet smell of morning coffee 🤣 thank you dear Jerry. 🌹

      • Thomas W Case

        Beautiful work Teddy, from a beautiful soul.

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you darling Poet, right back at you. 🌹

        • Michael Edwards

          Teddy sounds an amazing lady 🤣❤️

          • Teddy.15

            lol oh I'm not just a lady 🤣 thank you dear Michael, may your Easter be so very kind to you dear friend. 🌹

          • Goldfinch60

            Your soul is there to bring light to your life Teddy.

            An dy

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you dear Andy 🌹

            • teardrop

              Sounds like a beautiful soul. Thanks for the great read this morning.

              • Teddy.15

                Awe, thank you dear Teardrop 🌹

              • NafisaSB

                if the person is innately good, the aura is bound to be bright
                may yours always shine...

                • Teddy.15

                  May yours too my friend. 🌹

                  • NafisaSB

                    thank you. God bless you

                  • Mourgana of the Fey

                    Such a fine poem that is filled with rippled effects. Like starting into water and seeing the glimmer of the first rays of the sun. In this piece there is much reflected, the feminine and the portal s to the soul, much enjoyed the read!

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you once again for your beautiful words, lovely to know my scribbles are enjoyed by other wonderful writers like yourself🌹



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