ACUPUNCTURE
Hers was such an awful plight.
she was so upset that she cried.
She underwent acupuncture last night
and sadly her voodoo doll died
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Comments11
Now that is funny. I love humor in poetry and this is one of those. Lovely
Hahaha! I declare! You're characteristically too humorous. What a winner. Pity the thing died. Guess, hahaha. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and charming good humor. Thank you for sharing.
LoL I hope it want on me. 🤣
Love it
Now THAT is a twist! Great job, Michael. 🌹👏
Sorry to hear about her voodoo doll Michael. LOL
Andy
Good write M. LOL.
deep...
Your poem has a playful wit that made me chuckle. You have a way with words, and I genuinely enjoyed it.
poor poor doll, who took the mighty fall.. glad you survived it
Thanks everyone or all your comments = pleased I gave you all a smile.
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