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A place to ponder
views across tall mountains
in silence and peace.
Dry stone walls which dip
in valleys like arteries
lead the roving eye
to follow unending scenes
which time does not extinguish.
Earliest autumn
idyllic meditations
warm and benign days.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: April 23rd, 2025 01:09
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Serious for a change. We seem to have lost the ability to share our postings with Facebook - can anyone tell me why or how we can still do it?
I have just tested it and mine has posted OK.
I've lost the icon at the top of the page which I use to pot there - do you still have the icon?
Yes it was still there and I posted mine after seeing your comment about not seing it.
Andy
Good ones Michael, strangely I have out a Tanka on here a couple of minutes before yours went on here.
Andy
Fine writes and pic M. You counted all those (sylla) Berles?! lol.
The mind can rove over these words and follow many paths. The literal is beautiful in its images while one metaphoric path leads me to see the aging individual in its splendor as well. A lovely piece Michael
Both structure and content moved the reading, liked and faved 🤩🕊🙏🏻
Fine write, Michael. I Love the watercolor. My Facebook button is working. Never used it before. Got lost in it a bit as one does with Facebook.
I particularly love the vision and emotion from your first piece , stunning and I found the peace and the silence 🌹
definitely a place worth visiting from its wonderful description
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