Every morning I take my shower
The water washes away any stress
And the water on my skin touches my mind,
As any sadness, regret or anger
Go down the drain.
The cleanliness returns
As love, humour and light
Refresh my heart and mind.
Preparing me for the new day
In which joy and wonder
Will fill me with love,
Love for each and every day
As it has done for all the days,
All the days of my life.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I can honestly say that I haven't had a bath for many years as I shower every day. LOL
- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
A fine write Gold. I said the same thing - not had a bath for years. They said 'ugh!' I forgot to say I have regular showers. lol.
Thank you Orchi.
A shower much more efficient Gold. A lovely and refreshing poem of new beginnings. Loved it Andy
Much appreciated soren, thank you.
Andy
Most welcome Andy
A fresh start, enjoyed
Every day is a fresh start Tobani, thank you.
Andy
You are very welcome
A very good way to start each day!
It certainly is Tobani, thank you.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
Nice Poem and Analogy. As for Showers: I save money and use the Car Wash. 😗
Thank you Kevin,. so you wash your car everyday as well. LOL
Andy
What Car?
It's not just an act of gettting clean, it is a sensory experience of a spray of water touching every part of you, warm and soothing, comforting. You describe it so well. Happy showering my friend!
Very true Bella, thank you for your kind words.
Andy
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