Let Me Be

StormyDay

 

Let me be your air

When you can't breathe

Let me be your rain

When you thirst

Let me be your rock

When you lose your footing

Let me be your warmth

When your heart is cold

Let me be your hope

When you've none left

 

Let me be anything

Let me be everything

Let me be something to you

 

Or just let me be

  • Author: Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 15th, 2010 11:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: With the four elements in mind I wrote this poem: air, water, earth, and fire, with one in addition--light.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 61
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, DepressedWhiteNight
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  • dbremner

    Nicely done piece.

    • StormyDay

      Many thanks.

    • Cheeky Missy

      Sweet. I like it. Very nicely done with all your similes. I enjoyed it!

      • StormyDay

        Thank you, I put a lot of thought into it.

      • a soldiers wife13

        very nicely put...

        • StormyDay

          Thanks for your opinion. 🙂



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