What I Loved About You



I loved the way your hair
stuck out to one side
when you'd just woke up
it was the cutest bed-head
I'd ever seen.


I loved how your hand
enveloped mine
like a small child's
when we'd walk together
side by side.


I loved the way just your smile
could make my day
my favorite one
stretched to your ears
and made you look so silly.


I loved how your eyes
would change from green to brown
or somewhere in between
and that soft look you would get
saved just for me.


I loved the way your voice
enchanted me so completely
I could sit and listen
for hours on end
and never tire of it.


I loved how you would laugh
unexpectedly out loud
and wouldn't tell me why
it only made me wonder more
what you were thinking of.


I loved the way your arms
held me close yet gentle
how protected and safe I felt
when I was with you
and how loved I knew I once was.


I loved everything about you
and all that you were
every strength
and every flaw
I loved it all.


I loved you.

  • Author: Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 17th, 2010 13:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: My first serious relationship. Love lost, 'nuff said.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 50
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Wow. And it is a very sweet poem. I like all the descriptions you used to paint him...the picture your love drew was tender and funny and sweet. It is a rather delightful piece, excepting the tinge of sorrow in the "loveD." Sorry it only once was and is now no more. I enjoyed your loving him.

    • StormyDay

      Well, thanks. I think just trying to remember the good things and pushing away the bad is probably for the best.

    • dbremner

      This, I think, is well written, a nice poem.

      • StormyDay

        Thank you, I'm glad you both liked it.

      • a soldiers wife13

        very nice poem... it could possible get u far in the future...

        • StormyDay

          Thank you so much, I really hope so.

          • a soldiers wife13

            i tryed to be a writer then i just gave up....but dont be given up on ur dreams..

            • StormyDay

              I don't plan to. You could still be a writer if you wanted. It doesn't have to be your life's work, but maybe an on-the-side thing if it means something to you.

              • a soldiers wife13

                i wish... my life changed when i met a certain some one.. so i choose to be a police officer.. i want to make the world safer from my loved ones...

                • StormyDay

                  That's very noble of you. Well, paths change, but I hope you end up somewhere that ends in happiness.

                  • a soldiers wife13

                    thanx.. i wish for the same for u.. ive already found my happyness with someone.. i dont care if we are poor or not... its the love that matters...

                    • StormyDay

                      Agreed. 🙂

                      • a soldiers wife13

                        twas nice talkin to u..keep on written.. one day u will meet ur knight in shinning armor....

                        • StormyDay

                          I think I might have. Until next time then.

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