I loved the way your hair
stuck out to one side
when you'd just woke up
it was the cutest bed-head
I'd ever seen.
I loved how your hand
enveloped mine
like a small child's
when we'd walk together
side by side.
I loved the way just your smile
could make my day
my favorite one
stretched to your ears
and made you look so silly.
I loved how your eyes
would change from green to brown
or somewhere in between
and that soft look you would get
saved just for me.
I loved the way your voice
enchanted me so completely
I could sit and listen
for hours on end
and never tire of it.
I loved how you would laugh
unexpectedly out loud
and wouldn't tell me why
it only made me wonder more
what you were thinking of.
I loved the way your arms
held me close yet gentle
how protected and safe I felt
when I was with you
and how loved I knew I once was.
I loved everything about you
and all that you were
every strength
and every flaw
I loved it all.
I loved you.
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Author:
Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 17th, 2010 13:26
- Comment from author about the poem: My first serious relationship. Love lost, 'nuff said.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Wow. And it is a very sweet poem. I like all the descriptions you used to paint him...the picture your love drew was tender and funny and sweet. It is a rather delightful piece, excepting the tinge of sorrow in the "loveD." Sorry it only once was and is now no more. I enjoyed your loving him.
Well, thanks. I think just trying to remember the good things and pushing away the bad is probably for the best.
This, I think, is well written, a nice poem.
Thank you, I'm glad you both liked it.
very nice poem... it could possible get u far in the future...
Thank you so much, I really hope so.
i tryed to be a writer then i just gave up....but dont be given up on ur dreams..
I don't plan to. You could still be a writer if you wanted. It doesn't have to be your life's work, but maybe an on-the-side thing if it means something to you.
i wish... my life changed when i met a certain some one.. so i choose to be a police officer.. i want to make the world safer from my loved ones...
That's very noble of you. Well, paths change, but I hope you end up somewhere that ends in happiness.
thanx.. i wish for the same for u.. ive already found my happyness with someone.. i dont care if we are poor or not... its the love that matters...
Agreed. 🙂
twas nice talkin to u..keep on written.. one day u will meet ur knight in shinning armor....
I think I might have. Until next time then.
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