Look away and touch me not, love,
Lest the fire we feel consume:
Losing ourselves and what we were
Making one where once was two.
Cautiously now proceed my dear,
Beware as well what you say;
Just one look sets my heart racing
Also your mere touch inflames....
Silence now for what you've just said
Made my heart stop...and flutter:
You turn me on with little words
Careful now, what you utter....
Giving that look when our eyes met,
How the flick'ring flame provoked,
Roaring sudd'nly with vehemence,
A devouring fire in both.....
Needed but that electric touch
Making your conquest complete:
I give myself completely up----
You're intoxicating me!
What will we be when we wake up?
I know I can't rightly say...
Just that it better last fore'er.
...It's all YOUR fault, anyway!
19Dec10
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Author:
Chic George (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 24th, 2010 00:06
- Comment from author about the poem: It is a naughty piece...should I NOT post it?
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Comments5
Kool... you do have a humor side to you... great poem as always. It's not really "Naughty" it's more like a great piece of art. Remember me please when you're in book stores or other places signing autographs 🙂
Oh, but you made me laugh out LOUD, when I am so depressed.too! Thanks for your kindness....if such a marvel ever happens, will you be by my side, signing your books? Then we can inscribe one to each other! Not like that will ever happen to me, but it is a funny thought, eh? Thanks again!!!
Wonderful piece, sign me a book as well! Very glad you have posted it, it certainly deserves to be here.
Thanks alot for your vote of confidence! I'll remember you if I ever do get published....will you remember wee me when you are?
A LOVELY GIFT FOR UR HUSBAND.a GREAT POEM WITH GREAT PASSION WHICH DESERVES A 10
yours JVL
Thanks alot elder brother...if I ever get to belong to one, I hope he likes it too.
Beautiful poem, it provokes and inspires me
Thank you very much,...it still seems rather a naughty poem though.
Wow. Fascinating poem. Its not naughty, its mature and beatuiful. Really good work here, seriously!
Thank you very much. Naughty or no, I cannot say, but it is certainly my most popular submission, anyway.
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