Smashing and surging
Pounding the rocks below me
Thief of sailors souls.
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Author:
dbremner (
Offline) - Published: January 18th, 2011 13:22
- Category: Haiku
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Smashing and surging
Pounding the rocks below me
Thief of sailors souls.
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Comments2
Fascinating! I love it! You've described it so perfectly....both it's character and superficially as it is visually seen...each as it is experienced! Excellent!!
Why, you seem to like almost everything I write! Many thanks to you yet again.
Well...let's see, you were my first "favourite poet" and happily time and more submissions have not dimmed your glory! It is a pleasure to read your submissions...glad you like my comments well enough!
Powerfully written. Enchanting.
Many thanks to you.
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