Heavy Swell

dbremner

Smashing and surging

Pounding the rocks below me

Thief of sailors souls.

  • Author: dbremner (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 18th, 2011 13:22
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 28
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, StormyDay.
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Comments2

  • Cheeky Missy

    Fascinating! I love it! You've described it so perfectly....both it's character and superficially as it is visually seen...each as it is experienced! Excellent!!

    • dbremner

      Why, you seem to like almost everything I write! Many thanks to you yet again.

      • Cheeky Missy

        Well...let's see, you were my first "favourite poet" and happily time and more submissions have not dimmed your glory! It is a pleasure to read your submissions...glad you like my comments well enough!

      • StormyDay

        Powerfully written. Enchanting.

        • dbremner

          Many thanks to you.



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