Petal dancers float
on the light air in springtime
and fall to the earth
- Author: Stormy Day (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 19th, 2011 13:59
- Comment from author about the poem: A tribute to the original style and heritage of the haiku.
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 44
- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, dbremner
Comments4
Bang on target!
Wow. Excellent tribute!!!! And VERY sweet too! Perfecto! I love it!
Thanks to you both. I'm very lucky to have such sweet and encouraging critique(ers?).
A dramatic picture, very well written with such imagery.
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