Dizzy colours flash
Alive with childrens laughter
Heartbeat of the fair.
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Author:
dbremner (
Offline) - Published: February 3rd, 2011 12:45
- Category: Haiku
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Dizzy colours flash
Alive with childrens laughter
Heartbeat of the fair.
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Comments1
Excellent! Yet again, via the haiku you've succinctly snapshotted....a carousel! Beautifully done! I love it for how well you've done it, and seeing it by this description, can almost hear and smell the fair even now.....
Thanks very much!
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