"A Fortnight of Valentines"---my latest (crazy)whimsy....a collection of sappy sonnet (attempts), fraught with redundancy, and so hastily executed and crafted by imaginative fancy as to hopefully not be too repulsive to the reader. And yes, fairly UNedited, presently.
Day four
(sonnet attempt #XIX)
XIX
And did I hear you say that just to me?
How welcome your sweet accents reach my ears!
So like the birds which ever through the years
Do greet and rouse the newborn morning sweet,
Announce and hail new day exquisitely...
The waking heart quickening with such cheer,
Eyes sparkling, hopes arising, prospects dear
Of chances yet unseen, fond cherished dreams.
Oh Thine! My hand in yours forever claspt!
Together wherever our path may wend...
Through brightest days and gloomy nights....all Thine!
To share your joys, mine intertwined....we grasp
Nor hardly comprehend what these portend....
These two sweet words, my dearest Valentine!
13/14Jan11
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Author:
Chic George (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 4th, 2011 00:03
- Comment from author about the poem: The title made the theme, and I was trying to title many in this set by the little valentine candy heart statements...thus the inspiration for this rather sweet piece!
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Love it. Absolutely Love it...
Aw, sweet...that is kind of you. Thank you very much!
You are at the top of your sonnetering game with this!
Wow. You are too generous!....Now, remember, this is only the fourth day....boy oh boy...I sure hope the other 12 will be good enough....I saved my favourites to post around Valentines Day...Thanks again a ton!!!
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