Feel the chilling frost
of flurries against your face;
delight in the white.
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Author:
Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Comments4
Fine haiku on a natural theme as they are supposed to be. Great job with a fine wee rhyme to the end line!
Beautifully done, and delightful itself! I love the image you paired with it...too perfectly showing what your sweet haiku presented. Lovely, short and sweet! Excellent!
Thank you both so much! I really hope you enjoyed it.
"delight in the white"
delight in the sight... Yeah. I have fortunately experienced snowfall once. It was really a very fascinating venture!
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