The river flows fast
and then slows to a small stream
forever changing
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Author:
Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The River's course: It flows down from a mountainside, over rocks and ledges, through rapids and white water, then it comes to the bottom, where it trickles down to a stream and empties into an ocean, estruary, delta, ect... It's just the journey of the river, much condensed.
- Category: Haiku
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Couldn't understand it.
Think of the course of a river. Let's say it flows down from a mountainside, over rocks and ledges, through rapids and white water, then it comes to the bottom, where it trickles down to a stream and empties into an ocean, estruary, delta, ect... It's just the journey of the river, much condensed.
Excellently succinct, as usual, and well-penned. Quite enjoyable.
You have my gratitude.
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