Oh you are tapping on my window, how are you here?
How is he doing, my breeze, say it loud and clear
Did you bring me some of him, does he talk to you?
Dear wind, tell me of his stories and of him too
Fill the wind chime with his songs and stories
Let the leaves wave and tell me how he is
Blow all around me fill me with his thought
Let me breathe in all of his soul leave a thing not
Isn’t he carefree just like you blowing on his own will?
Makes his way through the hurdle and the hill?
All around me, not possible to catch, see his bend
So tell me didn’t I find you the perfect friend?
Return, blow away his tears if he sits down to weep
Dance to his laughter bring me some to keep
Give him the dreams I just put them on your flow
Cherish all his successes help him retain glow
In my place I've sent you as confidence, boost him
If he needs ears to pour himself listen to his scream
I've sent you tunes; put it to him, if he needs to talk
Keep track, does he ever think of me during his walk
Turn warm if he needs to heat up when it's cold
Chill down; when he needs air do as you're told
Bring to me his breath; let me check my name in it
Bring to me his smell; where aromas of zephyr sit
Well I can't ever be around he is all on his own
Wrap him up with my love when he is alone
Blow in his face, sugar nectar; check that he sips
Oh so sweet, my flying love, let land on his lips
O wind! O wind! Pace back remain like his shadow
Collect those few moments he saves for me go, go
I'm sending you; don’t let him know of it, a pint
Yes I miss him, you got to hide it not show wind
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Author:
sarah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 8th, 2011 05:20
- Category: Love
- Views: 36
- Users favorite of this poem: Emi, meigh, Cheeky Missy.
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Comments6
this is an honest tune of love and care,
Wind, always a messenger for love.
Great work Sarah!.
Wow... This was just amazing! I don't know what else to say, but wow. I simply loved it!
thank you shyam
thank you emi 4 ratin it wid a 10!
I think your going to be a great poet. good job
Excellent! This is impressive. Beautiful in its tender sentiments and longing, as well as so well-crafted, a very sweet and fascinating love poem. Lovely and well-written! I quite like it!
thank you :)...........
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