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Not Forgotten

I still remeber how lt use to be

I loved you and you loved me

I still can't belive it all went wrong

Its been elven years since your gone

That terrible night the fire broke

It was truly a miracle I awoke

Luckly we all managed to get outside

Then our daughter had gone back inside

You ran so fast into our burning home

I couldn't leave our two outher children alone

I finally had a chance to go back in there

It was horrible so much smoke,fire everywhere

I fell over our daughter lying on the floor

Oh my god she wasent breathing anymore

I raced her out and put her on the ground

Frantically on her chest I began to pound

She finally started to breath on her own

It was then I ran back into our burning home

The fire was to hot for me to bear

I had to run back out to get some air

I got out and turned around,there you were lying on the floor

I didn't want to,but I knew I was going back in once more

When I got you out I thought you would be alright

But the lord called you to him latter that night

And now I raise the children on my own and this is my fate

I will go on living but never replace you,my true soulmate

 

Comments7

  • sarah

    beautiful!

    • meigh

      thank you.god bless

    • Shyam

      That was brilliant. You managed to bring the details with good rhyming

    • Dolphine29

      I am deeply moved. I want to say, I just feel that you and the ones you love are going to be ok and are cared very much.
      I wish you the best
      Take care
      Dolphine.

    • Cheeky Missy

      Wow. It is very, very sad. What a horrible memory and great grief! You presented it well with rhyming. How very sad it is.

    • meigh

      thank you. but I had 5 years of a beautiful marriage and she gave me 3 wonderful children again thanks. god bless

    • aliveinua

      I started writing this comment... when suddenly I realised I don't know what to say... It's so overwhelming... words fail me... made me cry... sorry...

      Made me remember my own losses...
      Just be ok... please

      • meigh

        thank you. we have had a lot of time to heal god bless

      • Emi

        Awww this is very sad... :( Such an awful thing to happen...



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