I still remeber how lt use to be
I loved you and you loved me
I still can't belive it all went wrong
Its been elven years since your gone
That terrible night the fire broke
It was truly a miracle I awoke
Luckly we all managed to get outside
Then our daughter had gone back inside
You ran so fast into our burning home
I couldn't leave our two outher children alone
I finally had a chance to go back in there
It was horrible so much smoke,fire everywhere
I fell over our daughter lying on the floor
Oh my god she wasent breathing anymore
I raced her out and put her on the ground
Frantically on her chest I began to pound
She finally started to breath on her own
It was then I ran back into our burning home
The fire was to hot for me to bear
I had to run back out to get some air
I got out and turned around,there you were lying on the floor
I didn't want to,but I knew I was going back in once more
When I got you out I thought you would be alright
But the lord called you to him latter that night
And now I raise the children on my own and this is my fate
I will go on living but never replace you,my true soulmate
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richard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 9th, 2011 01:25
- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
beautiful!
thank you.god bless
That was brilliant. You managed to bring the details with good rhyming
I am deeply moved. I want to say, I just feel that you and the ones you love are going to be ok and are cared very much.
I wish you the best
Take care
Dolphine.
Wow. It is very, very sad. What a horrible memory and great grief! You presented it well with rhyming. How very sad it is.
thank you. but I had 5 years of a beautiful marriage and she gave me 3 wonderful children again thanks. god bless
I started writing this comment... when suddenly I realised I don't know what to say... It's so overwhelming... words fail me... made me cry... sorry...
Made me remember my own losses...
Just be ok... please
thank you. we have had a lot of time to heal god bless
Awww this is very sad... 🙁 Such an awful thing to happen...
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