Christina8

Love--(Senryu)

The first time we kissed

My heart just could not say no

I knew I loved you

 

So eager for you

My loving spirit implored

Couldn't get enough

 

So many years since

The feeling is still priceless

And two hearts remain

 

It's like a strong glue

that keeps us held together

Forever as one

 

Comments11

  • willyweed

    warms the heart nice work. ww

    • Christina8

      Thanks for the kind words ww! Appreciated! Christina

    • Daniel

      Wonderful piece!

      • Christina8

        Thank you! Very much appreciated! Christina

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        BRILLIANT CHRIS ~ You are a GENIUS ~ Four SENRYU all balanced 5-7-5 and not a rhyme in sight ! Love the theme and the very positive content of each ODE ~ I award you a SENRYU ~ Black Belt ~ HAIKU HUGS ~ BRIAN

        • Christina8

          I had to unryhme a few but it worked out. Thanks for the black belt~ and a stellar review! Hugs- Christina

        • WriteBeLight

          Wonderful job Christina, and I know you love the subject matter!

          • Christina8

            HA ha, yes it seems I love to talk about love. I'm trying to find new topics. Thanks for your great review!---Christina

            • WriteBeLight

              My pleasure!

            • Tony36

              Awesome write

              • Christina8

                Thanks Tony!

                • Tony36

                  Welcome

                • Michael Edwards

                  And I did enjoy - great Christina

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you very much!

                  • notapoet

                    Simply beautiful! Really loved this one chrissy...

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you so much! Loved your kind words!--Christina

                    • P.H.Rose

                      Really very beautiful
                      Chrissy......
                      I loved it....

                      • Christina8

                        Thank you so much! Means a lot!--Christina

                      • Fay Slimm.

                        Beautiful love such as this poem verses so well just has to be a forever thing. A lovely read Chrissy.

                        • Christina8

                          I really appreciate that you took time to read my poetry! Yes, I've been married 15 wonderful years!-Christina

                        • janetaylor

                          a beautiful love story💜 and so wonderful that you wrote it in senryu!

                          • Christina8

                            Thanks so much Jane! I appreciate your continued support. It means a lot!

                          • Neville

                            these are great each one of them.. they aint easy and like you say.. they are often misunderstood or badly composed....... Neville

                            • Christina8

                              Thank you, I really appreciate you taking the time to read these...Glad you liked!

                              • Neville

                                a real pleasure...



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