Doubt

P.H.Rose

                Doubt

Your in my mind at first rising light,
stay until the day turns to night.
Intercede when a topic I know,
interupt conversations full flow.
You made me think I couldn't do rhyme,
Even though I've done it time after time.
For years you've been a parrot on my shoulder,
Bending my ear, but not getting any older.
To long put up fences, and blocked roads,
prevented me from reaching any of my goals.
Now it's time to say goodby, show you to the door,
Slam it hard behind, and see you here no more.
Take off the shackles that you did bring,
Then as a free bird, my own tune I will sing....

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 19th, 2017 04:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Something that effects us all Even those you wouldn't think Would be ...are... believe me..
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Ah - this is truly showing Doubt the door for it can effect all writers at times - an inspiring read

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you so much Fay..

    • Michael Edwards

      Brilliant PH - also love the reference to the parrot on the shoulder - a useful euphemism I might use.

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you so much Michael
        You are very welcome to it..

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks for reminding us FRIEND ~ that there are people and circumstances that make us doubt our abilities ~ such things a dangerous ! I hope the Parrot perishes ~ we need your MUSE on fire ~ Your BRIAN

        • P.H.Rose

          Thank you for that Brian...

        • notapoet

          Awesome write P.H.R. this one hit home, I too have the parrot perched on my shoulder at times but now I make sure he sits on the right one because i'm half deaf in my right ear...I agree with Kat, a great poem from a great poet!

          • P.H.Rose

            Thank you NAP..
            That is such a
            Nice thing to say..
            I am honoured

          • WriteBeLight

            Do not listen to Doubt! Great job and I do not doubt that at all! 🙂

            • P.H.Rose

              Thanks for that lovely
              Comment WBL...
              My cup runuth over..

            • Augustus

              Remarkable. I like this a lot. I too have that disquieting thought more often than I like.

              • P.H.Rose

                Thank you Augustus,
                As I said its in those
                People you would
                Never think..

              • Tony36

                Great write

                • P.H.Rose

                  Thank you Tony.

                  • Tony36

                    Welcome

                  • Christina8

                    Great rhyming poem. Such a great topic to talk about because I think a lot of us have that darn parrot on our shoulders as poets. Thank you so much for this brilliant write! I loved it!

                    • P.H.Rose

                      Thank you chrissy for those
                      Lovely comments

                    • janetaylor

                      out with the doubt! look at that sentence....wow i am a poet and i didn't know it! :0) oh your poem made me smile and put me in a great mood. not only do you have great love for your children and grandchildren, your passion for life and art is infectious.....it flows out of your words, through the computer screen and into our souls. thanks for this gem!

                      • P.H.Rose

                        Oh Jane you have just made
                        My year not just my day...
                        Thank you so much for
                        That wonderful comment.
                        Coming from you it is indeed
                        An honour... Thank you....



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