BRIAN & ANGELA

ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !

 

PLEASE ENJOY THE HELICOPTER ALPHABET !

 

Always  Be  Calm

Don't  Ever  Fear

Grizzly  Hobgoblins

Incessant  Jeer !

 

Keep  Looking  Majestic

No  One  Pre~sees

Questions  Revealing 

Such  Threatening Unease

 

Victory  Will  X-ray

Your  Zealousness

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Yours  BRIAN

 

Try one yourself ~ easy to write ~ harder to rhyme !

 

The use of the word X-ray in the final couplet is used to imply

that after our Victory over fears and Hobgoblins the Zeal we

used to obtain that Victory will come under scrutiny ~ OK BRIAN 

 

Comments11

  • nicolerobbo

    That is great, I bet i couldnt do that but im going to do it and give it ago x

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks NICOLE ~ pleased you are having a GO ~ remember it does NOT have to rhyme ! Hugs BRIAN

      • nicolerobbo

        Your welcome and i know but im going to try and rhyme it see how it sounds x

      • 1 more comment

      • Michael Edwards

        Brilliant Brian - sounds a bit like a challenge !

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks MICHAEL ~ An interesting poem ~ always has two factors ~ Form & Function ~ BRIAN.

        • Shakerite

          Inventiveness is you're scene .
          Great attmpt

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks Friend ~ Pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN

          • rrodriguez

            Interesting form of poetry. Well done. You always bring us literary forms that are poety's quiver. Loved it.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              GRACIAS AMIGO ~ There are always two parts to any Poem ~ The STRUCTURE ~ the Rhyme & Rhythm & versification etc and The SUBJECT the Reason in the Poem. Where and when possible the two should complement each oher. With an Alphabetic Poem the Structure fixed ~ the Subject is more fluid but it must be Reason (coherent) unless it is designated as a "Nonsense Poem" and there are plenty of those ! BRIAN.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Ah - - now this is so clever and the read makes good sense - - your word-use is always impressive my friend.

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks FAY ~ you are very gracious. The sense of a Poem (unles it is classified as a "Nonsense Poem") is (for me) as important as it's structure. In English ~ we have 230,000 words at our disposal which makes "English Poetry" a delight to read and write. The use of the word X-ray in the final couplet is to imply that: Having overcome our fears and Hobgoblins our Zeal in securing Victory could come under scrutiny (X-ray). I hoped it all made sense ~ your comment has assured me it actually does ! Thanks BRIAN

              • Christina8

                That's impressive! I've only written abc poems using part of the alphabet. You did an outstanding job!! Hugs-Christina

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks CHRIS we have 230,000 words at our disposal ~ choosing 27 in alphabetical order is not difficult ~ arranging them in coherent order is more difficult and rhyming them a challenge ! I have now read this Poem and I am still confused by the final doublet ~ which in a Sonnet (this is a DECAIN) normally adds clarity ! Victory Will X-ray Your Zealousness ? Any suggestions for a kooler ending ? Hugs BRIAN.

                  • Christina8

                    I would xray a zebra or something. But thats just me. Have a great day!

                  • Tony36

                    Awesome write

                    • BRIAN & ANGELA

                      THANKS TONY ~ Pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN

                      • Tony36

                        Welcome

                      • WriteBeLight

                        Wow!

                        • BRIAN & ANGELA

                          Thanks HONEY ~ You liked it then ? Hugs BRIAN

                          • WriteBeLight

                            Yes. It was great. A lot of work went into that., Dear Brian. Excellent work.

                          • janetaylor

                            superb! loved the author's note ~ you always educate us as well as entertain us with your beautiful poems :0)

                            • BRIAN & ANGELA

                              Thanks JANE ~ Pleased you liked it ! You have to remember that the USA is FORTY times bigger than the UK ~ so to us each State is like another Country ! Thanks for adding UTAH to my FUSION ~ You really are an ANGEL ! I have added a picture of BEAUTIFUL UTAH ~ to illustrate your POEM and a comment at the beginning of my notes ~ OK ~ Gracias Besos y Abrazos ~ BRIAN

                              • janetaylor

                                oh wow the photo you posted on the fusion is breathtaking!! i guess now i will have to visit the uk :0) gracias a ti y abrazos, janey

                              • P.H.Rose

                                Very good Brian
                                Bloody well done sir

                                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                                  Thank you SIR ~ pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN

                                • Reese Marie

                                  This is so cool and creative!

                                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                                    Thanks REESE ~ Love your comment ~ I like to be Cool ~ Calm ~ Collected now I can add CREATIVE as well ! Hugs BRIAN



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