PLEASE ENJOY THE HELICOPTER ALPHABET !
Always Be Calm
Don't Ever Fear
Grizzly Hobgoblins
Incessant Jeer !
Keep Looking Majestic
No One Pre~sees
Questions Revealing
Such Threatening Unease
Victory Will X-ray
Your Zealousness
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Yours BRIAN
Try one yourself ~ easy to write ~ harder to rhyme !
The use of the word X-ray in the final couplet is used to imply
that after our Victory over fears and Hobgoblins the Zeal we
used to obtain that Victory will come under scrutiny ~ OK BRIAN
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 26th, 2017 04:36
- Comment from author about the poem: ABCDarian Poems ~ in which each line begins with the succeeding letter of the alphabet ~ are common' Less common are ALPHABETIC Poems in which each WORD begins with the succeeding letter alphabetically. Try on for yourself ! Making them scan and rhyme is more difficult ! There are over 230,000 words listed in the OXFORD ENGLISH DICTIONARY so there are plenty to chose from. Please comment ~ Yours BRIAN XOX
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That is great, I bet i couldnt do that but im going to do it and give it ago x
Thanks NICOLE ~ pleased you are having a GO ~ remember it does NOT have to rhyme ! Hugs BRIAN
Your welcome and i know but im going to try and rhyme it see how it sounds x
GOOD ON YOU NICOLE ~ Hugs BRIAN XOX
Brilliant Brian - sounds a bit like a challenge !
Thanks MICHAEL ~ An interesting poem ~ always has two factors ~ Form & Function ~ BRIAN.
Inventiveness is you're scene .
Great attmpt
Thanks Friend ~ Pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN
Interesting form of poetry. Well done. You always bring us literary forms that are poety's quiver. Loved it.
GRACIAS AMIGO ~ There are always two parts to any Poem ~ The STRUCTURE ~ the Rhyme & Rhythm & versification etc and The SUBJECT the Reason in the Poem. Where and when possible the two should complement each oher. With an Alphabetic Poem the Structure fixed ~ the Subject is more fluid but it must be Reason (coherent) unless it is designated as a "Nonsense Poem" and there are plenty of those ! BRIAN.
Ah - - now this is so clever and the read makes good sense - - your word-use is always impressive my friend.
Thanks FAY ~ you are very gracious. The sense of a Poem (unles it is classified as a "Nonsense Poem") is (for me) as important as it's structure. In English ~ we have 230,000 words at our disposal which makes "English Poetry" a delight to read and write. The use of the word X-ray in the final couplet is to imply that: Having overcome our fears and Hobgoblins our Zeal in securing Victory could come under scrutiny (X-ray). I hoped it all made sense ~ your comment has assured me it actually does ! Thanks BRIAN
That's impressive! I've only written abc poems using part of the alphabet. You did an outstanding job!! Hugs-Christina
Thanks CHRIS we have 230,000 words at our disposal ~ choosing 27 in alphabetical order is not difficult ~ arranging them in coherent order is more difficult and rhyming them a challenge ! I have now read this Poem and I am still confused by the final doublet ~ which in a Sonnet (this is a DECAIN) normally adds clarity ! Victory Will X-ray Your Zealousness ? Any suggestions for a kooler ending ? Hugs BRIAN.
I would xray a zebra or something. But thats just me. Have a great day!
Awesome write
THANKS TONY ~ Pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN
Welcome
Wow!
Thanks HONEY ~ You liked it then ? Hugs BRIAN
Yes. It was great. A lot of work went into that., Dear Brian. Excellent work.
superb! loved the author's note ~ you always educate us as well as entertain us with your beautiful poems :0)
Thanks JANE ~ Pleased you liked it ! You have to remember that the USA is FORTY times bigger than the UK ~ so to us each State is like another Country ! Thanks for adding UTAH to my FUSION ~ You really are an ANGEL ! I have added a picture of BEAUTIFUL UTAH ~ to illustrate your POEM and a comment at the beginning of my notes ~ OK ~ Gracias Besos y Abrazos ~ BRIAN
oh wow the photo you posted on the fusion is breathtaking!! i guess now i will have to visit the uk :0) gracias a ti y abrazos, janey
Very good Brian
Bloody well done sir
Thank you SIR ~ pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN
This is so cool and creative!
Thanks REESE ~ Love your comment ~ I like to be Cool ~ Calm ~ Collected now I can add CREATIVE as well ! Hugs BRIAN
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