My beautiful dove
From the mountains of Urayoán,
The one with grey-winelike plumage,
with the Caribbean deep-blue eyes;
I look on the dirt roads,
the sanctuary of the mountains,
the Savanna of sugarcane fields
And not seeing you there,
Perched on the Orange tree,
Neither in the water pond
Refreshing and crystalline;
My hope did not die
To see you again my dove,
With the Caribbean deep-blue eyes
burning with love.
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Author:
rrodriguez (
Offline) - Published: January 28th, 2017 00:26
- Comment from author about the poem: The dove is a symbol of someone I love.
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Read slowly this poem with its symbol of a beautiful dove shows great tenderness. I love the positive ending on hope. A lovely romantic verse.
Thank you Fay. Your words encourage to keep writing.
A beautiful piece that I just had to read several times over.
Thank you Michael. I'm encouraged.
I love Dove very much. Pleasant flow of this poem blows mind with interesting sense.
Thank you Pintu. I'm happy you enjoyed reading my poem.
As Michael said
Just beautiful
Well done sir..
Thank you P.H. Working on my book for my grandchildren.
Fantastic to hear, me also
I\\\'m concentrating on it and
Not writing much poetry
At the moment. But finding
Time to read and comment
On work such as yours...
Time really well spent..
Gracias Amigo Mio ~ My MPS symbol is "Una Paloma Blanca" and now you know why ! For me the symbol of Love is always a "Snowy White Dove". Elegant poem with a beautiful message ~ Thanks for caring BRIAN
Thank you Brian... my dove is grey-winelike with deep-blue eyes. They are originally from Puerto Rico. Thank you for reading my poem.
i absolutely adore this gem!
Jane, thank you for your kind word. Thank you for commenting, too.
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