rrodriguez

My Beautiful Dove

My beautiful dove

From  the mountains of Urayoán,

The one with grey-winelike plumage,

with the Caribbean deep-blue eyes;

I look on the dirt roads,

the sanctuary of the mountains,

the Savanna of sugarcane fields

And not seeing you there,

Perched on the Orange tree,

Neither in the water pond

Refreshing and crystalline;

My hope did not die

To see you again my dove,

With the Caribbean deep-blue eyes

burning with love.

Comments6

  • Fay Slimm.

    Read slowly this poem with its symbol of a beautiful dove shows great tenderness. I love the positive ending on hope. A lovely romantic verse.

    • rrodriguez

      Thank you Fay. Your words encourage to keep writing.

    • Michael Edwards

      A beautiful piece that I just had to read several times over.

      • rrodriguez

        Thank you Michael. I'm encouraged.

      • Pintu Mahakul

        I love Dove very much. Pleasant flow of this poem blows mind with interesting sense.

        • rrodriguez

          Thank you Pintu. I'm happy you enjoyed reading my poem.

        • P.H.Rose

          As Michael said
          Just beautiful
          Well done sir..

          • rrodriguez

            Thank you P.H. Working on my book for my grandchildren.

            • P.H.Rose

              Fantastic to hear, me also
              I\\\'m concentrating on it and
              Not writing much poetry
              At the moment. But finding
              Time to read and comment
              On work such as yours...
              Time really well spent..

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Gracias Amigo Mio ~ My MPS symbol is "Una Paloma Blanca" and now you know why ! For me the symbol of Love is always a "Snowy White Dove". Elegant poem with a beautiful message ~ Thanks for caring BRIAN

              • rrodriguez

                Thank you Brian... my dove is grey-winelike with deep-blue eyes. They are originally from Puerto Rico. Thank you for reading my poem.

              • janetaylor

                i absolutely adore this gem!

                • rrodriguez

                  Jane, thank you for your kind word. Thank you for commenting, too.



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