A few hours well spent....

P.H.Rose

A few hours well spent...

I've just done a favour for my daughter today,
Dropped off a writing desk, to a couple not far away.
So happy they were to receive this writing table,
To help with daughters drawing,to make her more able.
A sad face the father had, when relaying a story to me,
he couldn't pick it up, as his car wouldn't start you see.
I said I'll have a look, as I've worked on cars in the past,
Upon checking the vehicle, I said the cars problem won't last.
He said can you fix it, I would be so thankfully,
I said of course I can, it's only your battereee.
How can i repay, this kindness you've made,
A day out with my family, you have now definitely saved.
I said your happiness now,is all I can see,
if I were in the same boat,I'd hope someone would help me.

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 29th, 2017 18:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: My daughter sold a desk to someone But their car wouldn't start so I offered To deliver it... ended up fixing their car. They were goin to cancel a trip to the Seaside as it wouldn't start... I got so Much joy helping them, I refused payment The faces on the kids was payment Enough...... sometimes you can do A small thing for someone and to Them it's everything....I'm a happy Bunny today....
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  • rrodriguez

    The Good Samaritan, awesome! I enjoyed your poem very much.

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you RRodriguez

    • Corey

      Hi P. H. Rose, Your wonderful expression is how we in the world should be...kind to others. Nicely done!

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you Corey..

      • Augustus

        You are right, the feeling you get from helping or giving is awesome. Nicely done.

        • P.H.Rose

          Thanks Augustus

        • Michael Edwards

          lovely story and it gives a great start to the week.

          • P.H.Rose

            Thanks Michael I thought that to..

          • WriteBeLight

            Very cheeful message and I am sure you were very appreciated by all!

            • P.H.Rose

              For the last 4-5 years I love
              Doing things for other people
              I get a real kick out of helping.
              Prior to those years I was a
              very selfish human being...
              My grandson changed me..

            • janetaylor

              your poetry is very touching and brought tears to my eyes.....the tears came after reading your poem and then seeing your comment about how your grandson changed you. in never ceases to amaze me how much you love your children and grandchildren, and how you give so much credit to them, when you could take all of the credit for yourself. you are wonderful and the poem is a reminder that each and every day we should think of doing something for another :0)

              • P.H.Rose

                Now you've made me cry...
                Thank you Jane for that
                Beautiful comment...
                If you actually knew me
                As my family do, you would
                Know I never put my self
                In front... I really do have a
                Problem with self worth..
                Again thanks for those
                Lovely words...



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