janetaylor

trapped

the only way out
is within

©2017janetaylorhardy

Comments9

  • Michael Edwards

    I just love these short pithy pieces and this is just super

    • janetaylor

      thanks michael! :0)

    • Christina8

      I love this short but wise piece. Beautiful image to add to your poem. Love it!

      • janetaylor

        thank you christina i really appreciate your comment :0)

      • WriteBeLight

        A BEE-utiful thought!

        • janetaylor

          ha thanks so much :0)

        • Tony36

          Excellent write

          • janetaylor

            thank you tony :0)

            • Tony36

              Welcome

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              HIYA JANE ~ Love it when you get all philosophical ~ but what you say (in your poem) is both true and profound. We are all very obsessed with our outward appearance but the GOOD BOOK says that "GOD sees and knows the INNER MAN and INNER WOMAN (our personality)" If we would know ourselves ~ and achieve our potential we must see ourselves and know ourselves INSIDE OUT ~ See ourselves as GOD see us ~ AMEN. I love your poetry because you always share something precious of your unique INNER SELF ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ INNER HUGS ~ BRIAN

              • janetaylor

                thank you ~ your comments are always so well thought out and articulated!

              • P.H.Rose

                Few words to fill a page..
                Really very good Jane
                So very good..

                • janetaylor

                  thank you! i really appreciate it :0)

                • Pintu Mahakul

                  Yes, you are true. The reality is within self. On awakening we find this. This is very interesting.

                  • janetaylor

                    thank you ~ your comments are always so thoughtful!

                  • ron parrish aka wordman

                    a lot like people,trapped and only one way out !

                    • janetaylor

                      yes you are right ~ it is written for people ~ thank you so much ron!

                    • Pintu Mahakul

                      Very tiny poem with expression of mind entirely amazes us. An amazing sharing.

                      • janetaylor

                        Thank you kindly Pintu! :0)



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