I can't remember when
I felt so low and lonely
No reason to be sad
All my problems seem huge, only
insurmountable and not worth it
My depression is eating me alive
With the weather getting worse
it's just taking a dive
Doing daily tasks seems like
an impossible mountain climb
It was all I could do to
make a poem today that rhymed
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 1st, 2017 10:22
- Comment from author about the poem: March is a gloomy month on top of some bad experiences for me.
- Category: Sad
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Comments8
Good write. Something may change, maybe a little thing, to give hope, a spark again.
Thank you so much for your uplifting message! I appreciate it.
I don't want to show-off with my poems, and it depends if you have any religious/spiritual belief - but see my poems if you wish, if they bring any comfort to you maybe?
Just hope the emerging cycle of nature with all its promises helps - geed write Christina.
Thanks so much. I appreciate it!
Good write. The summer light will be with us soon and the light always helps.
Definitely. Just have to ride this out. Thanks for your positive feedback!
I hope You feel a little better, you said you did Thanks for sharing Christina! ww
Yes you made me feel better, thanks ww!
SMILE CHRISSY SMILE ~ Just for me ~please ! A Mountain to climb ~ A Poem to rhyme ~ A verse to blend ~ My poem to end ~ etc etc ! March CHRIS is always a Mad Month for Hares and Hatters ~ we can resolve to join them and be depressed or beat them and be happy. I'll be happy for you Angel ~ if you'll be happy for me OK ~ PROMISE ! The SUN will come out TOMORROW ! Read my Veggie Poem it wil really cheer you up ~ Hugs ~ just for you ~ CABBAGE HEAD !
Thanks so much for your wonderful reply. I'm smiling! I will read your poem. Thanks for wonderful feedback! Hugs--Christina
Depression treats us
In different ways
And different days
March the first, official
Day of spring, it's when
The first real sunlight
Jumps right in...
Great poem Chrissy
I like it very much....
Treat depression like
An old coat, some days
You carnt help but wear it
On all the others put
It in the cupboard....
To better days .... cheers !!
I will try to put that nasty thing away! But it's so hard for me during these months. Thanks so much for your feedback!
It helps to write about it. Nicely done. A warm hug.
Thank you Augustus! I appreciate the hug!
Hey Christina. I saw this post, but got interrupted and did not respond. I made a note to be sure that I returned to read your poem. You always have such cheery things to say to every fellow poet. I am sorry that the season is tough on you this time of year. I think you should try to pamper yourself. Do something for only you. I usually shop for a cheap pair of ear rings. Now, my drawer is loaded with ear rings. But, each brought me joy. So, I am hoping you will feel better, now that March is here. Have a great week kiddo!
Thanks so much for your support! March is really hard on me. But I will try to take your advice and pamper myself. Thanks again!
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