When the night is set on fire if it is ignited by our spark
from the flame of a burning candle we left burning in the dark
And the night is falling heavy with oh so many dreams there to recall
Costing the skulls and bones of many and the blood of almost all
Shall we look up to the heaven and pray to the sky that the rain may fall
It won’t quench the fires that we’ve started it won’t ease our pain at all
The angels will all be weeping should we beg for a second chance
For this time, there will be no healing and the candle’s flame will dance
We have left him at the portal where he holds all his doubt, this time he may not be willing to put the fires out.
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Author:
willyweed (
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loving your writing skills with this one willyweed. good sense of rhythm and the rhyming is spot on. I love the style you have created here so keep it coming my friend.
You enjoyed writing this and it shows my good mucker - keep 'em coming.
I did~ but I know not what a mucker be? must be an English thing? I sure its good so Thank You Michael! I do appreciate the read and comment. ww
A mucker is a friend, pal - it is another English slang word - before long Michael and I will have you talking slang.
Great write
Thanks Tony much appreciated!
You are welcome
Night Fires is so intriguing in its message. No only is the forest burning, but soul too if you don't find Him in our lives before the fires come.
Oh your getting warmer! Nice reading RR glad you were intrigued ? ww
Man has done a lot he regrets but the horse is out of the barn. Enjoyed ww.
Thanks Augustus I am happy you enjoyed this. I appreciate the read and comment!
very good write with great imagery.
Thank you me mucker oh mine! ww thank you for the read and comment!! ww
True poetry WW!
Awe shucks now you done went and embarished me! thank you I love it! ww
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