LADIES DAY AT THE GRAND NATIONAL ~ LIVERPOOL 2015
Can't multitask ~ we can't conceive
That's why GOD created EVE !
No glossy lips ~ no swaying hips
And no Girl Talk ~ no shopping trips
No silhouette and no velvet glove
It would be a World sans Love !
Mothers ~ Sisters ~ Daughters ~ Friends
Oh how the Ladies in My Life blends
Sharing Beauty ~ sharing Love
EDDIE the EAGLE ~ EVE the DOVE
Let praise for Ladies never cease
Divine provision ~ Love ~ Joy ~ Peace
That's why the UK's so serene
THERESA MAY and a PERFECT QUEEN
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX
This is a rhyming sonnet (6 6 2) in iambic tetrameter ~ OK
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BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: IMAGINE A World without Ladies ~ and you have just imagined HELL on EARTH. God too a long hard look at ADAM and thought "I can do much much better than that" and He did ! Comments welcome ~ Love ~ Peace ~ Joy to ALL ~ BRIAN XOX
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Great one Brian - I just wish they wouldn't wear those oh so silly 'hats' - especially the ones that serve no purpose at all and are erroneously called fascinators.
THANKS MICHAEL Point taken ~ Ladies don't need anything to make them fascinating ~ they just are ! You will notice that our Liverpool Judies (apart from one) are not sporting flashy titfas ~ unlike their smug Sisters from Ascot. Yours BRIAN
Ah Brian - titfer = tit for tat = hat : more cockney rhyming slang - it gets everywhere. Must write A Cockneys Lot Chapter Two sometime.
What would we do without them? Good write.
Indeed GF the World would be a much sadder place and it would also die ou in 3 generations because Men can't procreate. YY is not a viable gene pair but XX is but two ladies could on ly have daughters ~ so after 100 years you would have aa "World without Men" ! Sounds like Paradise on Earth ! Yours BRIAN
Yeah without ladies this world will be easier, but the men won't know how to live since us ladies has gave most of you knowledge. The men (most of them) will break this world more and we'll lose it completely.
Although I would perfer a world of guys because women are drama queens and guy can settle it with a fist fight most of the time. Not saying guys are horrible because some of them will bring this world together and mold it anew. Plus I get along with guys rather than girls.
I love them poem! Thanks for taking your time doing this. Its really appreciated.
Thanks WG7 ~ As I said EDDIE the EAGLE and EVE the DOVE ! Men & Ladies have very different ways of settling arguments. Girls gave "cat fights" but normally nobody gets killed ! In the USA Men often settle it TRUMP LIKE ~ with a GUN ! Pleased you liked the poem~ loved your comment ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
Wonderfully written tribute to our women
Well TONY ~ You know nd I know ~ They are worthit ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
Welcome
Good write.
Thanks "O" always a pleasure to pen an ode "In Praise of our Ladies" ~ BRIAN
no can do I wouldn't live in a world without love....I mean women.
The two (Ladies & Love) are synonymous WILLY ~ YES They were made to Love & Kiss ~ and who am I to interfere with this ..................... ? Yours BRIAN
A very nice tribute to women. I enjoyed your poem a lot! So many nice things that you said about women. A beautiful sonnet! Hugs--Christina
Thanks CHRIS ~ You should know me by now ~ and that I have a very high regard for all LADIES ! Their value (the scriptures say) is more precious than RUBIES an that applies from the minute they are born to the hour they die ! The way in which FEMALES are still treated and abused all over the World is appaling. W have a Lady as Head of State (Queen Elizabeth II) and a Lady Prime Minister ~ Theresa May so ladies in the Uk are very well represented in High Places. Trumps attitude to females (apart from everything else) makes him very unsuitable to be your PRESIDENT.
My Mum is great and my Sister and my Two Grannies were and I lots and lots of Aunties and Female Cousins ~ so there wre lots of strong Ladies in my extended Family. In my book Ldies re always worth what they get and more besides. Nothing HUGS like Dame ! Hugs BRIAN
Like a sky without stars. Nicely done. Great photo.
Thanks "A" ~ As a COLORADO Man you have a good eye for quality ! Northern Girls are all thoroughbreds ! Like a Pizza without Fromagio ! BRIAN
Wow a fitting tribute to women on women's day recent. Wonderfully said in gallant fabulous ink and wordings. Nice to read from u again.
Thanks for your comment ZK ~ much appreciated ~ Yours BRIAN
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