LADIES' DAY 2017 ~ A Sonnet

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

LADIES DAY AT THE GRAND NATIONAL ~ LIVERPOOL 2015

 

Can't multitask ~ we can't conceive

That's why GOD created EVE !

No glossy lips ~ no swaying hips

And no Girl Talk ~ no shopping trips

No silhouette and no velvet glove

It would be a World sans Love !

 

Mothers ~ Sisters ~ Daughters ~ Friends

Oh how the Ladies in My Life blends

Sharing Beauty ~ sharing Love

EDDIE the EAGLE ~ EVE the DOVE

Let praise for Ladies never cease

Divine provision ~ Love ~ Joy ~ Peace

 

That's why the UK's so serene

THERESA MAY and a PERFECT QUEEN 

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX

 

This is a rhyming sonnet (6 6 2) in iambic tetrameter ~ OK

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 7th, 2017 02:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: IMAGINE A World without Ladies ~ and you have just imagined HELL on EARTH. God too a long hard look at ADAM and thought "I can do much much better than that" and He did ! Comments welcome ~ Love ~ Peace ~ Joy to ALL ~ BRIAN XOX
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  • Michael Edwards

    Great one Brian - I just wish they wouldn't wear those oh so silly 'hats' - especially the ones that serve no purpose at all and are erroneously called fascinators.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      THANKS MICHAEL Point taken ~ Ladies don't need anything to make them fascinating ~ they just are ! You will notice that our Liverpool Judies (apart from one) are not sporting flashy titfas ~ unlike their smug Sisters from Ascot. Yours BRIAN

      • Michael Edwards

        Ah Brian - titfer = tit for tat = hat : more cockney rhyming slang - it gets everywhere. Must write A Cockneys Lot Chapter Two sometime.

      • Goldfinch60

        What would we do without them? Good write.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Indeed GF the World would be a much sadder place and it would also die ou in 3 generations because Men can't procreate. YY is not a viable gene pair but XX is but two ladies could on ly have daughters ~ so after 100 years you would have aa "World without Men" ! Sounds like Paradise on Earth ! Yours BRIAN

        • WG7

          Yeah without ladies this world will be easier, but the men won't know how to live since us ladies has gave most of you knowledge. The men (most of them) will break this world more and we'll lose it completely.

          Although I would perfer a world of guys because women are drama queens and guy can settle it with a fist fight most of the time. Not saying guys are horrible because some of them will bring this world together and mold it anew. Plus I get along with guys rather than girls.

          I love them poem! Thanks for taking your time doing this. Its really appreciated.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks WG7 ~ As I said EDDIE the EAGLE and EVE the DOVE ! Men & Ladies have very different ways of settling arguments. Girls gave "cat fights" but normally nobody gets killed ! In the USA Men often settle it TRUMP LIKE ~ with a GUN ! Pleased you liked the poem~ loved your comment ! Yours BRIAN (UK)

          • Tony36

            Wonderfully written tribute to our women

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Well TONY ~ You know nd I know ~ They are worthit ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN

              • Tony36

                Welcome

              • orchidee

                Good write.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks "O" always a pleasure to pen an ode "In Praise of our Ladies" ~ BRIAN

                • willyweed

                  no can do I wouldn't live in a world without love....I mean women.

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    The two (Ladies & Love) are synonymous WILLY ~ YES They were made to Love & Kiss ~ and who am I to interfere with this ..................... ? Yours BRIAN

                  • Christina8

                    A very nice tribute to women. I enjoyed your poem a lot! So many nice things that you said about women. A beautiful sonnet! Hugs--Christina

                    • BRIAN & ANGELA

                      Thanks CHRIS ~ You should know me by now ~ and that I have a very high regard for all LADIES ! Their value (the scriptures say) is more precious than RUBIES an that applies from the minute they are born to the hour they die ! The way in which FEMALES are still treated and abused all over the World is appaling. W have a Lady as Head of State (Queen Elizabeth II) and a Lady Prime Minister ~ Theresa May so ladies in the Uk are very well represented in High Places. Trumps attitude to females (apart from everything else) makes him very unsuitable to be your PRESIDENT.
                      My Mum is great and my Sister and my Two Grannies were and I lots and lots of Aunties and Female Cousins ~ so there wre lots of strong Ladies in my extended Family. In my book Ldies re always worth what they get and more besides. Nothing HUGS like Dame ! Hugs BRIAN

                    • Augustus

                      Like a sky without stars. Nicely done. Great photo.

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        Thanks "A" ~ As a COLORADO Man you have a good eye for quality ! Northern Girls are all thoroughbreds ! Like a Pizza without Fromagio ! BRIAN

                      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                        Wow a fitting tribute to women on women's day recent. Wonderfully said in gallant fabulous ink and wordings. Nice to read from u again.

                        • BRIAN & ANGELA

                          Thanks for your comment ZK ~ much appreciated ~ Yours BRIAN



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