I stood up for myself.
It was tough to do.
But, had to, at last.
Although it hurt you.
That tone that you use,
From that voice, yours.
Stabs me in the heart,
Deep down to my core.
The truth of it though,
You’ve used it for years.
Makes me question your love,
And, break down in tears.
Should have spoken up sooner.
But, kept it inside.
Like when I was a kid,
When, I’d run and hide.
They say when you’re hurt,
By someone you love.
It’s a sign they don’t like you,
You’re not held high above.
Then, little by little,
Over time feel their words.
Pain grows ever deeper,
Accustomed to the hurt.
Now despising yourself,
Allowed it to continue.
Until you finally gain courage,
Decide to put an end to.
So, you get it off your chest.
But, no better do you feel.
Realized you’ve unveiled,
Your secret Achilles’ Heel.
The one that developed,
Soon after you were born.
From someone supposed to love you,
And, to you bring no harm.
They continued to hurt you,
This someone you loved.
Apparently, they didn’t like you.
Didn’t hold you high above.
So embedded it remains,
This weakness, this space.
Buried so far within,
Inside an inner place.
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It was tough to do but I stood up with courage. Over time I felt their love. This is really very wonderful sharing. Inside inner place love did live for long.
Thank you. I think the pain one get\'s in their heart, that was put there by someone they love, probably hurts the most. I am sensitive to this, as a result of my childhood. I wish more people would think first before they verbally hurt the ones they are supposed to love. And, the one that was hurt should speak up before it goes on too long. Thanks so much for your kind words.
Thanks for sharing and sharing HONEY ~ I trust you found it cathartic for us to share and absorb ~ some of your angst ! Child abuse is the most heinous of crimes and can never really be fully forgiven ~ or alas forgotten. Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ Hugs BRIAN
Thanks Brian. My feelings were hurt recently and I realized I still have that weak spot in my armor. So, I do feel better putting it to paper. I think that many can relate. I appreciate your care and kind words.
I felt poetry always had that barrier breakage that let your heart flow and flourish others.
What you wrote here is very inspiring to not only others but yourself. A dedication to courage and belief to continue living no matter the odds. Yes, it may hurt or dwells around certain days of the year.
However, I want you to remember God is still with you even in the moments of our tribulations. Read Ephesians 6:12.
Keep writing scholarly poet. God bless you!
So kind of you to offer your knowledge. I agree about God and about writing. I just wish that Achilles' Heal of mine was healed over. Been a long time. Thanks again for your words.
Well written and expressed Great write
Appreciate it Tony 😊
Welcome
So I guess in the end we are all only human, and open to hurt and pain and love and joy, I hope you feel better soon/ ISLU WW
I feel great when I write things down and get them off my mind. I guess the thought of this is that we all have something inside that we do not want to reveal to others. We are all just humans and we should treat each other in a humane manner. Thanks WW. Love you too 🙂
thanks nice lady!
Thoughtful and good write.
Thanks orchidee.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem! I wear my heart on my sleeve too. Also from childhood pains. I hope you feel better after writing this poem. Christina
I really do Christina and thanks! It is great to clear the air. 🙂
Being sensitive is something many of us learn to live with and I applaud you for doing just that - a great piece of writing . to overcome
Thanks so much Michael. I wish I could be stronger when it comes to actions that hurt my feelings and can be related to my upbringing. I think many can relate that it is hard to heal everything inside. I thank you again for your comment. 🙂
I love this, great job
So kind of you littlegoat. Thanks so much for commenting. 🙂
Very strong and moving poem. Your courage shines through in writing these words. With that strength of character I am sure that you will be able to come out of this and move forward with a new piece of armour over the Achilles Heel.
I feel a lot better, and stronger, and a little more thick-skinned. 🙂 Thanks for the great comment.
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